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Not healthy

5/7/5 poem couplet

3 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Eckhart Tolle would agree with your message. Jealousy results from the ego chattering desiring to make us unhappy. So we could jail the ego and silence it and jealously would have no words or purpose. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
    Hello Liz, I appreciate your time and thank you very much for your encouraging comments and support.
Comment from RShipp
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'Jail jealousy' What a grand why to put setting jealousy aside!! I loved this thought!

Well done.

Best of luck in the 'One Word: Jealousy' writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Hello RShipp, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write, I thank you.
Comment from Ayan3
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That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.

Sincerely, Ayan

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Hello Ayan, I thank you.