Write Now
a 34-syllable poem16 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Say it- displayed it- in space and form. I just love the image and musicality that you bring on with these lines. Thank you for sharing the art of writing in a 34 syllables masterpiece.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Say it- displayed it- in space and form. I just love the image and musicality that you bring on with these lines. Thank you for sharing the art of writing in a 34 syllables masterpiece.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Iza
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever whimsy in fine form--witty title. Amusing and fresh theme--advising writers to work within confines of word restriction via this limited syllable poem. Good luck! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Clever whimsy in fine form--witty title. Amusing and fresh theme--advising writers to work within confines of word restriction via this limited syllable poem. Good luck! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Liz
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Ayan
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write for the 34 syllables. There are times I read very short poems and get a depth far exceeding the amount of words and other times I get to the end of a long poem and am not sure what it is saying.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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This is a good write for the 34 syllables. There are times I read very short poems and get a depth far exceeding the amount of words and other times I get to the end of a long poem and am not sure what it is saying.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Sometimes, if you are done, you should stop.
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yup!
Comment from Ben B.
"Write Now" rather than "right now." Ha funny. I know what you mean, I really hate it when my writing gets cropped. That's more or less why I gave up my twitter account.
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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"Write Now" rather than "right now." Ha funny. I know what you mean, I really hate it when my writing gets cropped. That's more or less why I gave up my twitter account.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Twitter is likely good practice for tanka or limericks.
Comment from Gloria ....
Exactly correct as to contest specs and what a fine verse full of a lot of wisdom too. Excellent metre and rhyme and the to say it, display it is a perfect punctuation mark for sage advice.
Wishing you great luck in the booth.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Exactly correct as to contest specs and what a fine verse full of a lot of wisdom too. Excellent metre and rhyme and the to say it, display it is a perfect punctuation mark for sage advice.
Wishing you great luck in the booth.
Gloria
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Gloria.
