Write Now
a 34-syllable poem16 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry poem. I like the way you formatted your lines. Your words are well-chosen and make a great statement. I agree with your words, too. We should look past what we see on the outside and find a writer's soul.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry poem. I like the way you formatted your lines. Your words are well-chosen and make a great statement. I agree with your words, too. We should look past what we see on the outside and find a writer's soul.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Nice entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that flow nicely. Good presentation
I like Japanese poetry because you have to say what you want to say in a few words.
Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Nice entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that flow nicely. Good presentation
I like Japanese poetry because you have to say what you want to say in a few words.
Well done!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks, GBR
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive, clear and creative. I identified well with the word of this poem. Writing helps the reader
display what I want to say. The poem flows and connects well. There
is a great message in these words. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive, clear and creative. I identified well with the word of this poem. Writing helps the reader
display what I want to say. The poem flows and connects well. There
is a great message in these words. Have a great day!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Harmony
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirty four syllable poem about saying something effectively in a few words are a real talent. Many people believe more words have more impact but I think many words are lost and gave no real impact.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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A very well-written thirty four syllable poem about saying something effectively in a few words are a real talent. Many people believe more words have more impact but I think many words are lost and gave no real impact.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Sandra. I can FILL with the best of them when necessary.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The reader, if they are writers will identify. We struggle with the right words and in some of these contests, we have to measure the nimber of words to fit the rules and yet to be able to make sense and say what we need to say. This is well done.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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The reader, if they are writers will identify. We struggle with the right words and in some of these contests, we have to measure the nimber of words to fit the rules and yet to be able to make sense and say what we need to say. This is well done.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Liz
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What truth is in this little poem. If what you wrote is taken to heart, people might find more satisfaction in their life. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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What truth is in this little poem. If what you wrote is taken to heart, people might find more satisfaction in their life. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, TT
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Sometimes it is hard to say all that you need to say. It is true that there is not enough space to speak the truth that you need to get out.
The second stanza confuses me a tad. I see that when you see the words you should read them I just didn't get the "fitting form"
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Sometimes it is hard to say all that you need to say. It is true that there is not enough space to speak the truth that you need to get out.
The second stanza confuses me a tad. I see that when you see the words you should read them I just didn't get the "fitting form"
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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It?s more a WRITE than READ assertion. Some need a ?Leaves of Grass? platform and others get it all in a haiku.
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
First I was confused with your authors opening comment "a 34 word poem" as it is only 31. But you followed the criteria for the contest. Best of luck with your entry. Those that are poets never lay a pen down unless they're done. Best regards.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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First I was confused with your authors opening comment "a 34 word poem" as it is only 31. But you followed the criteria for the contest. Best of luck with your entry. Those that are poets never lay a pen down unless they're done. Best regards.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Funny story. I wrote a 34-word poem and then saw it was a syllable count, not word. The other poem I posted under no restrictions.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am a big believer in people having their say and letting others decide what they think, this is what we do as poets and the mechanics of it all are cleverly explained here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I am a big believer in people having their say and letting others decide what they think, this is what we do as poets and the mechanics of it all are cleverly explained here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Yes, this fits the 34 Syllables writing prompt and states the obvious for many of us who just simply want to go on and on when they get started writing as their thoughts and ideas plug in the form of context of which they are trying to achieve. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Yes, this fits the 34 Syllables writing prompt and states the obvious for many of us who just simply want to go on and on when they get started writing as their thoughts and ideas plug in the form of context of which they are trying to achieve. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Giovanni
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