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Poem 34 syllables3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Ilike your many metaphors. I especially love the last line. I used to loe teaching about tectonic plates. Hopefully the reader will feel compelled to research them. This is the crux of the whole message. If people knew what shifting of the plates means and theresults, they would understand your cautionary tale. This is excellent. I have to give it A+.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Ilike your many metaphors. I especially love the last line. I used to loe teaching about tectonic plates. Hopefully the reader will feel compelled to research them. This is the crux of the whole message. If people knew what shifting of the plates means and theresults, they would understand your cautionary tale. This is excellent. I have to give it A+.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Superb review & thanks again for those 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from roof35
You have penned an excellent poem for the thirty-four syllables contest.
You said a lot in a few words and hit on how so many of us feel. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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You have penned an excellent poem for the thirty-four syllables contest.
You said a lot in a few words and hit on how so many of us feel. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thanks for a great review zanya
