Moving House
Acrostic Nightmare6 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
I wish I had a six star rating left to give you. You captured the misery of moving in a fun way that rhymed and made sense. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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I wish I had a six star rating left to give you. You captured the misery of moving in a fun way that rhymed and made sense. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the very positive review.
Comment from roof35
Your cute illustration sets the stage for your words. This is a fun read and one most can identify with. It is well written with no errors. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Your cute illustration sets the stage for your words. This is a fun read and one most can identify with. It is well written with no errors. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this very relatable piece. I was forced to move at the beginning of this year; not fun! Stay healthy and safe during this depressing pandemic! Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Congratulations on this very relatable piece. I was forced to move at the beginning of this year; not fun! Stay healthy and safe during this depressing pandemic! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. I have moved many times myself. It has been "interesting".
Comment from zanya
Well portrayed here , that demanding exercise of moving house which we all find ourselves doing at least once in our lives - well structured here in the Acrostic format
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Well portrayed here , that demanding exercise of moving house which we all find ourselves doing at least once in our lives - well structured here in the Acrostic format
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from equestrik
Oh how I hate moving! This is a fun and clever way to write about a chore that is so involved. The good thing about it, though is that it makes us look at all our stuff and if we need it or not.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Oh how I hate moving! This is a fun and clever way to write about a chore that is so involved. The good thing about it, though is that it makes us look at all our stuff and if we need it or not.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. The pre move chuck out is definitely a highlight.
Comment from pome lover
cute and an accurate account of do-it-yourself moving. Only consolation is money saved - at the expense, of course, of sanity.
Neat use of an acrostic poem - got all the horrific points in - so realistic you wore out the reader. :)
good description of "our very last move! I mean it!" :)
pome lover
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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cute and an accurate account of do-it-yourself moving. Only consolation is money saved - at the expense, of course, of sanity.
Neat use of an acrostic poem - got all the horrific points in - so realistic you wore out the reader. :)
good description of "our very last move! I mean it!" :)
pome lover
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. I've moved a few times and always an "interesting" experience.
