Winds of Change
A Minute poem for the contest71 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
I enjoyed reading your poem. The image worked well with the poem. The rhyme and rhythm just flowed beautifully. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The image worked well with the poem. The rhyme and rhythm just flowed beautifully. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Brenda. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Ayan. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Tony--Congrats on your prize--not surprised!
Lovely and elegant. Masterful metaphor and imagery of rebirth. I can visualize that cleansing wind tugging. Perhaps this will garner you the esteemed title: Minute Man of the Month! Fingers crossed. Cheers. LIZ
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Tony--Congrats on your prize--not surprised!
Lovely and elegant. Masterful metaphor and imagery of rebirth. I can visualize that cleansing wind tugging. Perhaps this will garner you the esteemed title: Minute Man of the Month! Fingers crossed. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Liz. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your minute poem reads well. I enjoyed reading it. The meter is super as are the rhymes. The image is fitting. Your message is clear about the seasons and what each brings. Your words are filled with imagery.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Your minute poem reads well. I enjoyed reading it. The meter is super as are the rhymes. The image is fitting. Your message is clear about the seasons and what each brings. Your words are filled with imagery.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Iza Deleanu
WOW, I love how you sneak in a little reminder from the Greek mythology: 'Persephone will bring fresh birth
and springtime mirth;
a warmer breeze
that also frees." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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WOW, I love how you sneak in a little reminder from the Greek mythology: 'Persephone will bring fresh birth
and springtime mirth;
a warmer breeze
that also frees." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Iza. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Sankey
Good one mate. Persephone new words to me have to look it up. Wishing you well in the contest. Talking about wind have been watching some train videos from Europe and seeing farms of Wind Generators. Only seen themm in Yass to our south in Aus. Are there any in SA?
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Good one mate. Persephone new words to me have to look it up. Wishing you well in the contest. Talking about wind have been watching some train videos from Europe and seeing farms of Wind Generators. Only seen themm in Yass to our south in Aus. Are there any in SA?
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Geoffrey. I appreciate your comments and the sixth star. I believe there are many wind generators in the north of SA but only a few scattered along the coast south of Adelaide. Best wishes, Tony
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I noticed on the rail videos some of the Wind Generators quite close to buildings. I understand they are nopisy and cause some sort of electromagnetic interferance? But I am told in Europe they get a LOT OF MONEY for agreeing to have the mills on their land.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Tony, this was absolutely beautiful. I wish I had six stars for it. The visuals and imagery are amazing, so is the artistic presentation and artwork. This should be a prime contender for this contest, good luck in the booths.
I never tried a Minute poem but will.
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Tony, this was absolutely beautiful. I wish I had six stars for it. The visuals and imagery are amazing, so is the artistic presentation and artwork. This should be a prime contender for this contest, good luck in the booths.
I never tried a Minute poem but will.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Yelena. I appreciate your comments and good luck wishes. All the best, Tony
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It was a beautiful poem, Tony, and you inspired me to write a Minute poem.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a superb minute poem, Tony. Your iambic metre written to precision, rhymes too, and even more importantly each stanza from the winter season into the always uplifting spring, at least in my opinion.
A most enjoyable read today and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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This is a superb minute poem, Tony. Your iambic metre written to precision, rhymes too, and even more importantly each stanza from the winter season into the always uplifting spring, at least in my opinion.
A most enjoyable read today and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Gloria. I appreciate your positive comments, six star award, and good luck wishes. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is so free. It has wind and breeze. Winter turns into spring. It has birth that caused mirth? I really like this fast changing world.
Well done.
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This poem is so free. It has wind and breeze. Winter turns into spring. It has birth that caused mirth? I really like this fast changing world.
Well done.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Lisa. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are freeing, descriptive and creative. The author's words were filled with hope. Can the virus being slowly going
away? I like the extreme descriptive words the author used to convey
a sense of freedom. Thank you, Tony, for such an uplifting poem....
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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The author's words are freeing, descriptive and creative. The author's words were filled with hope. Can the virus being slowly going
away? I like the extreme descriptive words the author used to convey
a sense of freedom. Thank you, Tony, for such an uplifting poem....
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Harmony. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony
