Picture Perfect Poetry
Rhyme in Perfect Harmony21 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your poem is the metaphor. The word placement and rhythm do what the poem says it will do. This poem could be a cool rap. Just add a little beat box in there and you've got it. well done.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Your poem is the metaphor. The word placement and rhythm do what the poem says it will do. This poem could be a cool rap. Just add a little beat box in there and you've got it. well done.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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What a lovely review - thank you so very much! I had fun putting this one together and am so happy that you enjoyed! Thank you again and have a wonderful evening!
Comment from robyn corum
Mimi,
I liked your summation of your poetry and the efforts you take to create something special. *smile* The last two verses were my favorite!
Creativeness, fortuity
A little ingenuity
Inventiveness through inspiration
Flows from my imagination
At end I look upon its whole
In hopes I've reached this author's goal
Through rhyme and perfect harmony
Penned picture perfect poetry
So creative and smart! Thank you!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Mimi,
I liked your summation of your poetry and the efforts you take to create something special. *smile* The last two verses were my favorite!
Creativeness, fortuity
A little ingenuity
Inventiveness through inspiration
Flows from my imagination
At end I look upon its whole
In hopes I've reached this author's goal
Through rhyme and perfect harmony
Penned picture perfect poetry
So creative and smart! Thank you!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review, Robyn! It was a fun one to write and so happy you enjoyed! Have a beautiful day!
Comment from Chelle_GH
A Picture Perfect Poetry Indeed! Excellent Work of Art. The white background with the italic elegant font and image has been creatively crafted. Wishing you all the best!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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A Picture Perfect Poetry Indeed! Excellent Work of Art. The white background with the italic elegant font and image has been creatively crafted. Wishing you all the best!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for the lovely review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed... it was fun to write!
Comment from rama devi
I love how your phrasing, rhyme and musicality echoes the very subject you're portraying! Great slant rhymes too. Good timing. It works fine with no punctuation, though I would have liked it even better with a few in-line commas. Just my taste. It's easy to read and digest, as it is.
One example is here, word by word:
'Til(,) word by word(,) my thoughts unite
One spag issue here, since thoughts is plural, sculpt should not have an 's':
And sculpts each stanza that I write
And sculpt each stanza that I write
I especially applaud this slant rhyme:
And as each stroke streams from my pen
In phrase, in quote or idiom
My favorite stanza and rhymes:
Creativeness, fortuity
A little ingenuity
Inventiveness through inspiration
Flows from my imagination
Nice alliteraiton of I as well!
Lots of great stuff here. Should fare well in the contest. Good luck!
Warmly, rd
PS Nice presentation too!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I love how your phrasing, rhyme and musicality echoes the very subject you're portraying! Great slant rhymes too. Good timing. It works fine with no punctuation, though I would have liked it even better with a few in-line commas. Just my taste. It's easy to read and digest, as it is.
One example is here, word by word:
'Til(,) word by word(,) my thoughts unite
One spag issue here, since thoughts is plural, sculpt should not have an 's':
And sculpts each stanza that I write
And sculpt each stanza that I write
I especially applaud this slant rhyme:
And as each stroke streams from my pen
In phrase, in quote or idiom
My favorite stanza and rhymes:
Creativeness, fortuity
A little ingenuity
Inventiveness through inspiration
Flows from my imagination
Nice alliteraiton of I as well!
Lots of great stuff here. Should fare well in the contest. Good luck!
Warmly, rd
PS Nice presentation too!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review and for your comments on suggestions. I had great fun putting this one together! I agree that "sculpts" could be correctly changed and am going to make the change to the following line, making it
"To sculpt each stanza that I write"
Thank you again for the lovely review!
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So glad you found it helpful, and thanks for your enthusiastic and gracious response! :-)))
Warm Smiles, rd
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is beautiful writing I love the way it flows. Good rhyming. Picture perfect poetry. Rhyme in perfect harmony. I like your choice of words. Sums up the creative writing process.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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This is beautiful writing I love the way it flows. Good rhyming. Picture perfect poetry. Rhyme in perfect harmony. I like your choice of words. Sums up the creative writing process.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review! I am so happy that you enjoyed reading (and especially enjoyed my choice of words)! Thank you again and have a wonderful evening!
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Your welcome
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Your welcome
Comment from equestrik
This is a very clever and creative poem about writing. You have done a wonderful job with rhythm and with the word usage. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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This is a very clever and creative poem about writing. You have done a wonderful job with rhythm and with the word usage. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I am honored that you awarded me six-stars for my writing and am so happy that you enjoyed! Thank you again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Nice entry in this contest theme. You've cleverly put together rhymes about poetry. I like the line "Creativeness, fortuity A little ingenuity
Inventiveness through inspiration Flows from my imagination" Good job with the poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Nice entry in this contest theme. You've cleverly put together rhymes about poetry. I like the line "Creativeness, fortuity A little ingenuity
Inventiveness through inspiration Flows from my imagination" Good job with the poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for the lovely review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it... I definitely had fun putting it together! Thanks again and have a beautiful week!
Comment from amada
Hi unknown writer, I think this was a labgor of love for you. You did a very good job and I applaud you because you didn't give up. Many times I read those poems of famous poets...and I feel so like in kindergraten... Your poem here is contagious.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Hi unknown writer, I think this was a labgor of love for you. You did a very good job and I applaud you because you didn't give up. Many times I read those poems of famous poets...and I feel so like in kindergraten... Your poem here is contagious.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful six star review! It was quite fun to write and I'm so happy that you felt it was "contagious!" Thank you again for this honor!
Comment from lyenochka
You did a lovely job with this poem about writing poetry with well done meter, rhyme and lots of alliteration! I hope your "picture perfect poem" does well in the contest.
As contest deadline does draw near
Promote it so it will appear
prominent in reviewers' eyes
May it do well and win a prize!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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You did a lovely job with this poem about writing poetry with well done meter, rhyme and lots of alliteration! I hope your "picture perfect poem" does well in the contest.
As contest deadline does draw near
Promote it so it will appear
prominent in reviewers' eyes
May it do well and win a prize!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review! It was a fun one to write and I'm so happy you enjoyed! Thank you again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked your concept here of painting pictures with words and these scenes then delight the reader and you wrote about this action in detail here, perfect rhymes and meter and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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I liked your concept here of painting pictures with words and these scenes then delight the reader and you wrote about this action in detail here, perfect rhymes and meter and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for the lovely review! It was fun to write and am so happy you enjoyed! Have a wonderful day!
