Muse adrift
2/4/4/12 syllable poem3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a good subject for readers who are writers. It tells our story. We will identify. It is the artist in us; never really right. But then if time has passed and I happen upon something I allegedly wrote. I ask myself, "Did I write this? It's great." I'm voting for this one.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This is a good subject for readers who are writers. It tells our story. We will identify. It is the artist in us; never really right. But then if time has passed and I happen upon something I allegedly wrote. I ask myself, "Did I write this? It's great." I'm voting for this one.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I thank you for your enthusiastic review and am grateful for your vote.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the
topic and description.
-I like how you describe
your writing process, and
then end with your
must "being adrift."
-Maybe it will return,
and then you'll win the contest!
-I like your entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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-Nice artwork.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the
topic and description.
-I like how you describe
your writing process, and
then end with your
must "being adrift."
-Maybe it will return,
and then you'll win the contest!
-I like your entry; good luck.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Pam, my friend I am pleased that you like the write; appreciate your time, than you.
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You are very welcome, anonymous friend:)
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You are very welcome, ameen.
Comment from Fred Berg
The first two lines could be a short poem all to themselves; how many times have we all stared at the indentations of the words we just erased?Such a restless feeling when your muse is "adrift". I dont think mine has ever dropped anchor! Evocative of the feeling you get staring into a cup of coffee with a pen in your hand. Well done. Good luck with the vote.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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The first two lines could be a short poem all to themselves; how many times have we all stared at the indentations of the words we just erased?Such a restless feeling when your muse is "adrift". I dont think mine has ever dropped anchor! Evocative of the feeling you get staring into a cup of coffee with a pen in your hand. Well done. Good luck with the vote.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Fred, my friend I appreciate your time and the thoughtful comments, thank you.