Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

Yes, that would be today's thought of a person entering into something they are not certain about.

You have the correct amount of syllables for each line and good luck in the contest.

The picture is terrific.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

And again thanks for those 6 bright stars zanya

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This short poem graphically describes what the first day of school will be like for many students this fall. I particularly like your closing phrase--"a frisson of fear."
Rod

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks for sharing zanya

reply by RodG on 26-Aug-2020

You are very welcome.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

Love this post as I am headed back to work tomorrow with the kiddos and staff all in masks. I am excited to see them and look forward to this pandemic being over so the fear can recede.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

Great job. The syllable count is correct. The picture matches the poem. The timing of this poem is right on. Unfortunately many will not be returning to school mask or no mask.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks for sharing zanya