Armageddon
Three Line Poetry Contest20 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt three-line poem. I think the current situation that seems irreversible make the most positive people a little negative. Keep the faith high and never fail to pray for His mercy.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt three-line poem. I think the current situation that seems irreversible make the most positive people a little negative. Keep the faith high and never fail to pray for His mercy.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the review and your understanding.
Comment from The Death
Hi Val,
It's easy to relate with the thoughts you have presented here. The world after pandemic is more chaotic than ever. If that wasn't enough, there is more bad news coming from every part of the world. You have nicely highlighted the current issues here. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Hi Val,
It's easy to relate with the thoughts you have presented here. The world after pandemic is more chaotic than ever. If that wasn't enough, there is more bad news coming from every part of the world. You have nicely highlighted the current issues here. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This is such a beautiful and well written review! You really "got" my little poem. Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So many people have felt this way with recent events and how the world has changed beyond recognition. We should have appreciated the good times for they are now gone, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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So many people have felt this way with recent events and how the world has changed beyond recognition. We should have appreciated the good times for they are now gone, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this lovely well written review. They are few and far between on this sight. You really "got" my little poem
Comment from Boogienights
The angels will not be the only ones crying. This is presented quite well, and it's a subject which scares me a little. I hope it happens a thousand years from now. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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The angels will not be the only ones crying. This is presented quite well, and it's a subject which scares me a little. I hope it happens a thousand years from now. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the review
Comment from royowen
Well done Val, I don't know whether angels weep, but Jesus did when He was here, but we can't take God by surprise, He saw this at the time before creation's time, I am happy that the time draws closer of His imminent return, Jesus saw this pandemic just before His departure. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Well done Val, I don't know whether angels weep, but Jesus did when He was here, but we can't take God by surprise, He saw this at the time before creation's time, I am happy that the time draws closer of His imminent return, Jesus saw this pandemic just before His departure. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Roy.
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Welcome Val
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Val.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I can understand having
many mixed emotions; I
think we all are doing the same thing,
unless we're a robot, but the computer
says we're not:)
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The imagery is good, as the
angel weeps over what is
happening and what it feels like-
"Armagedon comes."
-Good luck in the contest.
-[Armageddon]
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation, Val.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I can understand having
many mixed emotions; I
think we all are doing the same thing,
unless we're a robot, but the computer
says we're not:)
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The imagery is good, as the
angel weeps over what is
happening and what it feels like-
"Armagedon comes."
-Good luck in the contest.
-[Armageddon]
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, my friend, there is no easy way to write this "stuff"
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You are very welcome, and I agree.
Comment from equestrik
I think you are successful with this write as it does provoke thought and causes one to consider their lives etc. Your picture goes perfectly with the write.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I think you are successful with this write as it does provoke thought and causes one to consider their lives etc. Your picture goes perfectly with the write.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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thank you for the review
Comment from zanya
Yes recent events are really having an impact on our lives and thought processes wondering where we are going -succinctly captured here in this short format
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Yes recent events are really having an impact on our lives and thought processes wondering where we are going -succinctly captured here in this short format
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your insightful review.
Comment from RShipp
You are right- there is a touch of gloom here.
I annoyed your poem, but I will chose not to believe its premise. Although there are times that evil seems to prevail- in the end ...
A perfectly chosen picture for your poem.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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You are right- there is a touch of gloom here.
I annoyed your poem, but I will chose not to believe its premise. Although there are times that evil seems to prevail- in the end ...
A perfectly chosen picture for your poem.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review. I too hope this does not become a reality, but with positive must be negative. Poetry should evoke both emotions.
Comment from trimple
Good evening, Val
This 'three line poem' reveals your concerns about the world we live in today. It's true that we all face the future with uncertainty, but take comfort in knowing that there are also thousands of wonderful things also happening every day across the globe. :)
A thoughtful write
kind regards
trimple
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Good evening, Val
This 'three line poem' reveals your concerns about the world we live in today. It's true that we all face the future with uncertainty, but take comfort in knowing that there are also thousands of wonderful things also happening every day across the globe. :)
A thoughtful write
kind regards
trimple
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Of course there positive things going on in the world, but I believe poetry in any form should show both the positive and the negative. I wanted to evoke an emotion here, and it seems I have hit a nerve with some (not you). Thank you for the review.
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Unfortunately, Val, most if not all the wonderful things that happen are bearly broadcast... Guess happy news don t sell as well. However, we certainly live in an extraordinary moment in history.
