Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Possibilities"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
12 total reviews
Comment from Markie Doczi
This is cute, with few words illustrating a likely fun-filled and affective relationship between grandfather and grandson.
This looks like an interesting challenge too!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This is cute, with few words illustrating a likely fun-filled and affective relationship between grandfather and grandson.
This looks like an interesting challenge too!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark D. R.
yep, grandkids provide joy and curiosity to our lives - good addition to this collaboration
I too have used the FanArtist for my posts - good choice for your entry
mark
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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yep, grandkids provide joy and curiosity to our lives - good addition to this collaboration
I too have used the FanArtist for my posts - good choice for your entry
mark
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your positive and insightful feedback!
Comment from Teri7
This is very good couplet you have penned to go in the book. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing, love, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This is very good couplet you have penned to go in the book. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing, love, Teri
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written couplet I. Addition to the multi-author Renga book that tells a story bit by bit. Different elements are at play and the direction often changes to another scene and perspective.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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A very well-written couplet I. Addition to the multi-author Renga book that tells a story bit by bit. Different elements are at play and the direction often changes to another scene and perspective.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Yes, that's the fun of this book of Renga, you never know where the path is leading us. Thank you for dropping by to read and offer your thoughts!
Comment from Bill Schott
This couplet for the renga, Possibilities, uses the seven-seven formatting and extends the reach of our expanding poem to the sweet fruit of the future and our obligation for those who will live there.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This couplet for the renga, Possibilities, uses the seven-seven formatting and extends the reach of our expanding poem to the sweet fruit of the future and our obligation for those who will live there.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Yes, our future is our children. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Another fine addition to Gypsy's book June. Kids love to touch things out of reach and Grandparents are always on hand to help, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Another fine addition to Gypsy's book June. Kids love to touch things out of reach and Grandparents are always on hand to help, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you - it?s a lot of fun being part of this Renga book.
Comment from equestrik
I like the simplicity here and can connect well with the title. In the arms of the man and the outreach of the child I can see that there are possibilities.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I like the simplicity here and can connect well with the title. In the arms of the man and the outreach of the child I can see that there are possibilities.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, June,
Thank you very much for adding to our renga book. I can always rely on you doing an excellent job with renga. Your couplet follows my 5/7/5 nicely. Good job!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello, June,
Thank you very much for adding to our renga book. I can always rely on you doing an excellent job with renga. Your couplet follows my 5/7/5 nicely. Good job!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Glad you liked this follow up. Children are our hope...
Comment from Joan E.
What a splendid addition to the "Possibilities" renga! Your couplet is the perfect description of the scene in VMarguarite's artwork. You should sponsor one of these chapters. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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What a splendid addition to the "Possibilities" renga! Your couplet is the perfect description of the scene in VMarguarite's artwork. You should sponsor one of these chapters. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
I've got five apples, if you include my granddaughter too, they are truly precious as well. I don't necessarily want them to do what I did, I want them to speak the truth, and do what's right. Beautifully written renga June, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I've got five apples, if you include my granddaughter too, they are truly precious as well. I don't necessarily want them to do what I did, I want them to speak the truth, and do what's right. Beautifully written renga June, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you! Isn't it such a joy to have grandchildren?