We are one
Cinquain14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Where, indeed! I liked this one, I think the term 'family' needs clarifying for many people, so they know under God's eyes, they are not different people to Him, but they are all his children. Until people realise that, this stupid word will live on. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Where, indeed! I liked this one, I think the term 'family' needs clarifying for many people, so they know under God's eyes, they are not different people to Him, but they are all his children. Until people realise that, this stupid word will live on. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Sandra, I am pleased to read your wonderful insights and thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Paul Borders
Uhzacklee !! Good point. I'm so tired of hearing the word "racism". Ninety-nine percent of people use it incorrectly. I like the fact you started with Adam. Then made the point we are all the human race.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Uhzacklee !! Good point. I'm so tired of hearing the word "racism". Ninety-nine percent of people use it incorrectly. I like the fact you started with Adam. Then made the point we are all the human race.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Paul and thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts/insights.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain. There is only one human race although we are devided in two groups there USCG he evil ones who do evil, and live on evilness. The other group is kind and loving God fearing abd do good to others. Skin color doesn't devide us we are devided by good or evil.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Cinquain. There is only one human race although we are devided in two groups there USCG he evil ones who do evil, and live on evilness. The other group is kind and loving God fearing abd do good to others. Skin color doesn't devide us we are devided by good or evil.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Sandra and thank you very much for the wonderful insights, I agree with you.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Many would not want to admit or believe that we all began in Africa. We all have many races in our deepest geneology. This will draw the reader in to debate in their head or with oithers, this question. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Many would not want to admit or believe that we all began in Africa. We all have many races in our deepest geneology. This will draw the reader in to debate in their head or with oithers, this question. Well thought out.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Liz and thank you for your time and the thoughtful insights.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Good question to put out there into the world. We are all family and all come from the same starting duo, depending on what you believe. Why can't we just see human.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Good question to put out there into the world. We are all family and all come from the same starting duo, depending on what you believe. Why can't we just see human.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Mia, I appreciate your visit and the kind comments, thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Family writing prompt contest. It follows the contest rules well.
I like the idea that we all come from the same family.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Family writing prompt contest. It follows the contest rules well.
I like the idea that we all come from the same family.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Gypsy, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! This whole concept of "race" was a man made categorization that is not of God and it has caused so much grief to humanity. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Amen! This whole concept of "race" was a man made categorization that is not of God and it has caused so much grief to humanity. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for your visit and the insights.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good writing entry for the Family writing prompt. It is a happy poem and should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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This is a good writing entry for the Family writing prompt. It is a happy poem and should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello Rebecca, I thank you for stopping by and am glad that you like the poem.
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry makes a valid point, Mystery Writer. Good job with the cinquain style. You give readers much to think about which is good. I like your image choice. It would be great if the world could read this and take your advice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Your contest entry makes a valid point, Mystery Writer. Good job with the cinquain style. You give readers much to think about which is good. I like your image choice. It would be great if the world could read this and take your advice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello Jan, I appreciate your encouraging review and the thoughtful comments, thank you.
Comment from RShipp
'Where did the term racial come from?' What an excellent question! I think that this concept has to be learned and then mimicked.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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'Where did the term racial come from?' What an excellent question! I think that this concept has to be learned and then mimicked.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the thoughtful comments, thank you.