Sidewalk Chalk
Come create with me!17 total reviews
Comment from Andrelyn Izquierdo
I love how you color coded each line of your poem to symbolize further the subject, title, and picture. Like a curious child expressing their creativity on the solid, taught grounds using surrounding inspiration of all things they see more than an adult would pay attention to. Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I love how you color coded each line of your poem to symbolize further the subject, title, and picture. Like a curious child expressing their creativity on the solid, taught grounds using surrounding inspiration of all things they see more than an adult would pay attention to. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thanks for such an awesome review, Andrelyn - very appreciated.
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You're welcome. Well deserved.
Comment from roof35
This poem is a fun read. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. I particularly like your closing line. This is nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This poem is a fun read. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. I particularly like your closing line. This is nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thanks for such an awesome review, roof35 - very appreciated.
Comment from CandySoda777
I like the light, childish theme of your short acrostic poem. The rhyming just adds to the concept of your poem. I'm impressed you managed to write a good acrostic poem with rhyme, I usually like to write free style without any limits because I find it easier, but you pulled this off nicely. Good job! :)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I like the light, childish theme of your short acrostic poem. The rhyming just adds to the concept of your poem. I'm impressed you managed to write a good acrostic poem with rhyme, I usually like to write free style without any limits because I find it easier, but you pulled this off nicely. Good job! :)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, CandySoda for such a wonderful review and those bright, shiny stars - I'll be starting the week off with a smile over here! May you have a sunshiny week of your own out there and be sure to stop by after the contest is over! ;)
Comment from zanya
This Acrostic is a celebration of sidewalk art which really allows the artists to freely express themselves in chalk drawings and etchings - 'Simple strokes and masterpieces'
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This Acrostic is a celebration of sidewalk art which really allows the artists to freely express themselves in chalk drawings and etchings - 'Simple strokes and masterpieces'
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your comments.
Comment from michele will
A wonderfully visual colorful poem. You captured the essence and made it seem easy. I liked Your word choices , 'Eg., colored strings'
Thank you for your hard work
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A wonderfully visual colorful poem. You captured the essence and made it seem easy. I liked Your word choices , 'Eg., colored strings'
Thank you for your hard work
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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My thanks for your review. 8-)
Comment from equestrik
This is certainly a creative entry for the acrostic poem contest. I love children's chalk art. The students at my elementary often draw at recess. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This is certainly a creative entry for the acrostic poem contest. I love children's chalk art. The students at my elementary often draw at recess. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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My thanks for your review. 8-)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Sidewalk chalk, the title of the poem, is a nice acrostic poem has a good contributory exposure to the thematic maturity; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Sidewalk chalk, the title of the poem, is a nice acrostic poem has a good contributory exposure to the thematic maturity; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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My thanks for your review. 8-)
