Sidewalk Chalk
Come create with me!17 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has lovely images described. It's sad how our minds get filled with the negative violent images even in the midst of such beauty. This concept brings me to a news issue where some possibly mentally ill man was tryoing to wash off the beautiful chalk art a little girl did. A couple of the things she wrote among lovely art was Black Lives Matter. That seemed to have sent this man reeling. This is why I rarely watch the news or spend anytime on these matters of fb. It seems everything has become political.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This has lovely images described. It's sad how our minds get filled with the negative violent images even in the midst of such beauty. This concept brings me to a news issue where some possibly mentally ill man was tryoing to wash off the beautiful chalk art a little girl did. A couple of the things she wrote among lovely art was Black Lives Matter. That seemed to have sent this man reeling. This is why I rarely watch the news or spend anytime on these matters of fb. It seems everything has become political.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Liz, for your review -- yes, we got rid of cable a few months ago and found it was much easier to smile... ;) :) :) Find your heart where you are and let it thrive! ;) Yvette
Comment from Carlos' girl
brilliant, I love this poem. this speaks to me, it is so gorgeous, I can't do it justice in a review. the darling sidewalk artists all over the world are so perfectly portrayed here.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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brilliant, I love this poem. this speaks to me, it is so gorgeous, I can't do it justice in a review. the darling sidewalk artists all over the world are so perfectly portrayed here.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Oh, I am so very glad you enjoyed this one, my lady! :) Those stars and, especially, your wonderful review are such a bright start to long week -- thank you!! ;) My apologies for the delayed response - usually a lot more on top of things... Be sure to stop by again sometime and have a Terrific Tuesday! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a clever poem! Poetic language, even rhyme make this a most charming read, and the imagery evoked is a delight. I will be very surprised if this is not this contest's winning entry. :))
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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What a clever poem! Poetic language, even rhyme make this a most charming read, and the imagery evoked is a delight. I will be very surprised if this is not this contest's winning entry. :))
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Good morning, Lady Dawn -- thanx so much for your review on the colorful chalk... much appreciated down here! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thanx for your review on this colorful fun here, Ayan! :) Have a Terrific Tuesday! ;) Yvette
Comment from mermaids
You have created a unique and creative poem. I like the different colors you use, like sidewalk chalk. "Curious those smiling flowers", an image I can see on the sidewalk. You have written a vivid acrostic poem.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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You have created a unique and creative poem. I like the different colors you use, like sidewalk chalk. "Curious those smiling flowers", an image I can see on the sidewalk. You have written a vivid acrostic poem.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
This is a very creative poem about the characteristics of a sidewalk. I remember playing hopscotch on our sidewalk. Also, I remember drawing the sidewalk sketch to play the game. This is a very creative acrostic of the words, sidewalk chalk. This is a nice line, "Lil' hands become grand architects... Kindergarten visionaries!" Well done. I love how you used the colors to emphasize various words. Happy future writing:-)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Hello,
This is a very creative poem about the characteristics of a sidewalk. I remember playing hopscotch on our sidewalk. Also, I remember drawing the sidewalk sketch to play the game. This is a very creative acrostic of the words, sidewalk chalk. This is a nice line, "Lil' hands become grand architects... Kindergarten visionaries!" Well done. I love how you used the colors to emphasize various words. Happy future writing:-)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Joyce, for this wonderful review - have a wonderful Monday!
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You are welcome. Enjoy your Monday, also.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Acrostic about sidewalk chalk that can make great artists with amazing imagination from little children when they are getting from the freedom to express themselves.
Typo
Laves(possibly Leaves)?
ranbow(rainbow)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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A very well-written Acrostic about sidewalk chalk that can make great artists with amazing imagination from little children when they are getting from the freedom to express themselves.
Typo
Laves(possibly Leaves)?
ranbow(rainbow)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review and the catch on rainbow (laves is correct). Always great to get your input.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the colour here of the chalks and the creations on the pavements. A whimsical write filled with your imagination. I so enjoyed this piece. I stumbled on the meter on this line and suggest you take out the word green.
Have a laugh at (green) dogs with wings.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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You brought the colour here of the chalks and the creations on the pavements. A whimsical write filled with your imagination. I so enjoyed this piece. I stumbled on the meter on this line and suggest you take out the word green.
Have a laugh at (green) dogs with wings.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I believe it is fixed, my lady.... Thank you so much for the heads-up - so appreciated!
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You are so welcome, this is a magical write x x x
Comment from Boogienights
I love the colorful way you present this acrostic poem, and how you lined up your words. This is very original and a good contest winner. Thank you and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I love the colorful way you present this acrostic poem, and how you lined up your words. This is very original and a good contest winner. Thank you and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the review - so glad you enjoyed!
Comment from RShipp
A perfect picture for your poem. And I loved the different colored lines.
What a great conclusion!
Best of luck in the Acrostic Poem writing contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A perfect picture for your poem. And I loved the different colored lines.
What a great conclusion!
Best of luck in the Acrostic Poem writing contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the review - so glad you enjoyed!
