Unpacking Love
When love goes wrong21 total reviews
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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That was an amazing poem and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this poem.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks! Have a great day.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Powerful--you punch all the points--spot on--well conveyed notwithstanding the acrostic challenge--startling imgery--intimacy bound in cube of ice! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Powerful--you punch all the points--spot on--well conveyed notwithstanding the acrostic challenge--startling imgery--intimacy bound in cube of ice! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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LIZ, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, I am grateful this is a work of fiction.
Comment from royowen
Love has always based on preferring others to oneself, it has never been based on what's good for self. And sometimes it's based of feelings, but love is classically a verb, not a noun. Beautifully written entry in this contest, great acrostic, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Love has always based on preferring others to oneself, it has never been based on what's good for self. And sometimes it's based of feelings, but love is classically a verb, not a noun. Beautifully written entry in this contest, great acrostic, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Roy, I do appreciate your comments and good wishes.
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Most welcome
Comment from lennis
The new word I learned to day was 'vainglorious'. I love it! Good use of the acrostic style to share the story of a broken relationship. We can all relate to these feelings, which you have described well. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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The new word I learned to day was 'vainglorious'. I love it! Good use of the acrostic style to share the story of a broken relationship. We can all relate to these feelings, which you have described well. Nicely done!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I appreciate the time taken to read and comment have a great week.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A failed relationship with some misunderstandings here and your fine acrostic tells a sad tale as hearts are broken and love departs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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A failed relationship with some misunderstandings here and your fine acrostic tells a sad tale as hearts are broken and love departs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Dolly, for many reasons, I am so grateful this is poetic work of fiction.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Unpacking love", is a well-written and intriguing piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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"Unpacking love", is a well-written and intriguing piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Duchess, as always , thank you!
Dear Anon,
as always, you're very welcome.
God bless,take care and keep sharing!
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You did a good job writing this Acrostic poem and unpacking love, too. Selfishness is the main cause of breaking up. I totally agree. I wish you can have some hope in the end. Otherwise, it is a well written poem.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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You did a good job writing this Acrostic poem and unpacking love, too. Selfishness is the main cause of breaking up. I totally agree. I wish you can have some hope in the end. Otherwise, it is a well written poem.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Kisa, thank you for your validation of this poem.
Comment from equestrik
This is a good submission for the acrostic poem contest. Of course it is always sad when a relationship becomes unhinged and this expresses that well.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This is a good submission for the acrostic poem contest. Of course it is always sad when a relationship becomes unhinged and this expresses that well.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Yes, it is sad, but life does go on and every experience we can take a lesson to grow from.
Comment from michele will
wow, so sad - i do hope the inspiration for this piece of work was reading a sad romance novel and not from personal experience. i am guessing the latter however as the pain in your words seems very real. i like the way you set it up. don't like to whitewash but i cannot think of a way to improve it. congrats
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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wow, so sad - i do hope the inspiration for this piece of work was reading a sad romance novel and not from personal experience. i am guessing the latter however as the pain in your words seems very real. i like the way you set it up. don't like to whitewash but i cannot think of a way to improve it. congrats
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Michele, thanks for your time to read and comment on this poetic work of fictional expereince.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your acrostic poem is very creatively-composed and SO powerful, vividly describing why a relationship has failed and is irreparable. The I and E lines are especially expressive of the heartbreak and accompanying bitterness.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Your acrostic poem is very creatively-composed and SO powerful, vividly describing why a relationship has failed and is irreparable. The I and E lines are especially expressive of the heartbreak and accompanying bitterness.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Janice, I am so very grateful for your validation on this piece, have a fantastic week!
