Embrace Life
Time is short8 total reviews
Comment from Dick Waters
Simple, sweet and to the point. How many of us take for granted life, and at the end wish for just another day or two.
Entered myself, but I like yours better.
Dick
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Simple, sweet and to the point. How many of us take for granted life, and at the end wish for just another day or two.
Entered myself, but I like yours better.
Dick
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for being so kind. I like acrostic poetry, it's fun to write. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem.
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My pleasure. I never wrote poetry before joining FS in May. I never realized the many different types of poems there are.
Best regards,
Dick
Comment from RShipp
Thanks, a very optimistic outlook - while not ignoring the problems around us- not being defined by those problems.
Enjoyed.
Best of luck.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks, a very optimistic outlook - while not ignoring the problems around us- not being defined by those problems.
Enjoyed.
Best of luck.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for taking time to read my poem and fir this thoughtful review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is very nicely done. It invites the reader to reflect where they fall in the spectrum. Hopefully, they choose the option to live life to the fullest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is very nicely done. It invites the reader to reflect where they fall in the spectrum. Hopefully, they choose the option to live life to the fullest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for reading. I think everyone would be happier if they did. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Embrace Life, the title, very orderly and balanced the acrostic poem is expressed; thematic calibration is fine about keeping and enjoying positive living shaking off negativity in course of living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Embrace Life, the title, very orderly and balanced the acrostic poem is expressed; thematic calibration is fine about keeping and enjoying positive living shaking off negativity in course of living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
I enjoyed your rhyming scheme. "Everywhere there are people with hope just like you," is a promising thought. We should all think in this manner. Best of luck with your "Acrostic poem" entry. Best regards.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed your rhyming scheme. "Everywhere there are people with hope just like you," is a promising thought. We should all think in this manner. Best of luck with your "Acrostic poem" entry. Best regards.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you. I really appreciate your nice review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A powerful acrostic with a strong message. We should enjoy every day and thank God for giving us this day. Too many people complain - and if we look at it, there may be many reasons to complain. But it's wrong, you brought it out very well.
You have an award-winning artistic presentation and photo, and I love your visuals.
This should be a prime contender in that contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A powerful acrostic with a strong message. We should enjoy every day and thank God for giving us this day. Too many people complain - and if we look at it, there may be many reasons to complain. But it's wrong, you brought it out very well.
You have an award-winning artistic presentation and photo, and I love your visuals.
This should be a prime contender in that contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life can be a trial for some people and coping with it can be hard at times, but we have to move with the times and deal with the challenges otherwise we die, a poignant acrostic, well thought out with good rhyming too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Life can be a trial for some people and coping with it can be hard at times, but we have to move with the times and deal with the challenges otherwise we die, a poignant acrostic, well thought out with good rhyming too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review.
Comment from equestrik
I lOVE this write. It is positive in the face of so many wanting to dwell on the negative. I so appreciate this. I also think it is an excellent write for the acrostic contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I lOVE this write. It is positive in the face of so many wanting to dwell on the negative. I so appreciate this. I also think it is an excellent write for the acrostic contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and the 6 stars. I'm truly appreciative.
