Oooh, La La!
A lively celebration you don't want to miss...19 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used your twenty-five words expressively to describe nature's "concert," performed on a summer night, free for all to enjoy. Excellent figures of speech
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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You have used your twenty-five words expressively to describe nature's "concert," performed on a summer night, free for all to enjoy. Excellent figures of speech
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed - thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty five word poem about the sounds and pleasures of summer evenings that leave sweet memories on our minds for years to come.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A very well-written twenty five word poem about the sounds and pleasures of summer evenings that leave sweet memories on our minds for years to come.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Sandra!
Comment from Eternal Muse
The presentation is just amazing. I like the artwork you chose. I learned new words today - Bossa Nova, and thank you for explaining them to us. I liked the visuals in these lines -
cicada vibrations
and crisp mockingbird beat
This should do extremely well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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The presentation is just amazing. I like the artwork you chose. I learned new words today - Bossa Nova, and thank you for explaining them to us. I liked the visuals in these lines -
cicada vibrations
and crisp mockingbird beat
This should do extremely well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Eternal Muse!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Celebration is a matter of enjoyment and whatever the cause, you are excited to enjoy the celebration, summer or heat is no matter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Celebration is a matter of enjoyment and whatever the cause, you are excited to enjoy the celebration, summer or heat is no matter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Alcreator!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the vibrant sounds you brought to life here as the sun beats and all creatures join in the song and beat of life, these nature sounds that soothe and remind us that we share this planet, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I loved the vibrant sounds you brought to life here as the sun beats and all creatures join in the song and beat of life, these nature sounds that soothe and remind us that we share this planet, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from equestrik
I really enjoyed this and feel that the picture was perfect for the poem. It so speaks of summer and the heat and the vibe of summer. Really nice entry for the 25 word poem contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I really enjoyed this and feel that the picture was perfect for the poem. It so speaks of summer and the heat and the vibe of summer. Really nice entry for the 25 word poem contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, equestrik!
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, " cicada vibrations
and crisp mockingbird beat", because the words you used immediately brought visuals to me and put me into the poem!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Nehemiah 8:10
New International Version
10 Nehemiah said, "Go and enjoy choice food and sweet drinks, and send some to those who have nothing prepared. This day is holy to our Lord. Do not grieve, for the joy of the Lord is your strength."
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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My favorite part was, " cicada vibrations
and crisp mockingbird beat", because the words you used immediately brought visuals to me and put me into the poem!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Nehemiah 8:10
New International Version
10 Nehemiah said, "Go and enjoy choice food and sweet drinks, and send some to those who have nothing prepared. This day is holy to our Lord. Do not grieve, for the joy of the Lord is your strength."
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Fonda!
Comment from Tina Crute
I love the creative formatting of the words. It's as if they are on a dance floor scattered and moving to the beat. Your word choice summons images and sounds we have heard before. It reminds me of summertime with music on the park. This is so entertaining:)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I love the creative formatting of the words. It's as if they are on a dance floor scattered and moving to the beat. Your word choice summons images and sounds we have heard before. It reminds me of summertime with music on the park. This is so entertaining:)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Tina, for such an awesome review - you have rounded out my weekend with a big ol' smile over here! 8-) Take care and have a wonderful week!
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You are welcome! I'm the kind of reviewer that says exactly what the poem makes me see or feel. Not very technical, but authors need to know the reader connects:) I did!
Tina
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, Ooh la la, has the proper word count and sends one up for the bossa nova. I didn't know anything other than the name. Maybe I'll check it out.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This twenty-five-word poem, Ooh la la, has the proper word count and sends one up for the bossa nova. I didn't know anything other than the name. Maybe I'll check it out.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Bill!
