Forever
5/7/5 poem couplet12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful romantic poem entry for the Love writing prompt contest. I wonder if this is fiction or about someone you love :) well done.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend
Beautiful romantic poem entry for the Love writing prompt contest. I wonder if this is fiction or about someone you love :) well done.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Much of what I write is fiction my friend, I appreciate your time and thank you very much for visiting.
Comment from RShipp
Wow! Congratulations on over a half-century of loving!
You will have to write some poems on the secrets you have learned to a lasting friendship.
Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Wow! Congratulations on over a half-century of loving!
You will have to write some poems on the secrets you have learned to a lasting friendship.
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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It's simple my friend, first 40 years let her be the boss and remaining years, wear earplugs....he-he. I thank you for your time and the kind review.
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Hahahaha! I won't tell!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely poem entry for the Love writing prompt. Love makes the world go around, and love memories are the greatest, lasting the longest. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This is a lovely poem entry for the Love writing prompt. Love makes the world go around, and love memories are the greatest, lasting the longest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello Rebecca, I am glad you like the poem; I thank you for your time and the kind comments.
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You're very welcome! I voted for this poem.
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Much obiged my friend, I am grateful, thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written double 5-7-5 poem about a love that started many years ago and still thriving after sixty years together that us a true love that lasts forever.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A very well-written double 5-7-5 poem about a love that started many years ago and still thriving after sixty years together that us a true love that lasts forever.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello Sandra and thank you for visiting; I appreciate your time and the thoughtful comments.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Sometimes the best love comes from your best friend. Remember when "Bobby" kissed you on the cheek under the sliding board in the third grade? Sometimes it develops and you become "Mrs. Bobby" at twenty years old. That's real love. I like the poem and I like the picture!
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Sometimes the best love comes from your best friend. Remember when "Bobby" kissed you on the cheek under the sliding board in the third grade? Sometimes it develops and you become "Mrs. Bobby" at twenty years old. That's real love. I like the poem and I like the picture!
Patty
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello Patty, I appreciate your visit and thank you very much for the wonderful review.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from lyenochka
It's a beautiful thing to be in love with one another since you were children! What a blessing and good job conveying your love story in these two 5-7-5 stanzas!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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It's a beautiful thing to be in love with one another since you were children! What a blessing and good job conveying your love story in these two 5-7-5 stanzas!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, very kind of you to visit; I appreciate your time and the thoughtful review, thank you.
Comment from equestrik
This is so very sweet. I do think you need the word 'a' between It's and real in the first line. This is what we all wish for, a love that lasts beyond all the daily strife.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is so very sweet. I do think you need the word 'a' between It's and real in the first line. This is what we all wish for, a love that lasts beyond all the daily strife.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I am pleased you like the write; also, appreciate your suggestion about "a", I left that out purposely to meet the syllable count (poetic license); I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
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oh, ok
Comment from mermaids
Love this little poem about true love and how long it lasts. My parents were married sixty-two years. In six lines, you tell a love story that makes the reader feel good.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Love this little poem about true love and how long it lasts. My parents were married sixty-two years. In six lines, you tell a love story that makes the reader feel good.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Hello friend and thank you for stopping by; I appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sweet contest entry, Mystery Writer, that covers true love from a young age to well into sixty years of marriage. Your image choice is perfect. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and a great message.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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What a sweet contest entry, Mystery Writer, that covers true love from a young age to well into sixty years of marriage. Your image choice is perfect. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and a great message.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Hello Jan, I am pleased that you like the poem; I appreciate your time and the wonderful comments, thank you very much.
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with your beautifully written "Love" writing prompt entry about a long lasting love that time has not managed to erase. Nice easy, smooth read. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Best of luck with your beautifully written "Love" writing prompt entry about a long lasting love that time has not managed to erase. Nice easy, smooth read. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for stopping by; appreciate your visit and I am pleased you like the write.
