Birthday Wish!
Blow out the candles and make a wish!5 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is hilarious. At first the reader thinks the speaker is talking about their false teeth. Then there is a twist because they are referring to their real teeth. Fun.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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This is hilarious. At first the reader thinks the speaker is talking about their false teeth. Then there is a twist because they are referring to their real teeth. Fun.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for the great review and so glad you enjoyed the twist! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Melissa Russell Deur
I love this funny poem! You set me up to think you were talking about dentures, then I realized you meant your original teeth. This also would have been a great entry for a rhyming poem contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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I love this funny poem! You set me up to think you were talking about dentures, then I realized you meant your original teeth. This also would have been a great entry for a rhyming poem contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for the great review! It was a fun one to write! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
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Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much! Have a great day!
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Funny poem. Aging bring lots of problems we never imagined in our youth. I would wish a little more patience with others and with ourselves over these inevitable issues. Good job with the poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Funny poem. Aging bring lots of problems we never imagined in our youth. I would wish a little more patience with others and with ourselves over these inevitable issues. Good job with the poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for the great review and am so happy you enjoyed! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was great fun. I enjoyed your humor, your rhyming, you creative imagery and presentation. This
should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This was great fun. I enjoyed your humor, your rhyming, you creative imagery and presentation. This
should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for the great review! So glad you enjoyed! Have a grand day!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with your "25 Words" contest entry. It is very funny and the rhythm flowed pretty consistent. I was concerned with the word count. After checking, 2 of the three word counters says 25. You should be in the clear. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Best of luck with your "25 Words" contest entry. It is very funny and the rhythm flowed pretty consistent. I was concerned with the word count. After checking, 2 of the three word counters says 25. You should be in the clear. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much! I double checked on the word "Clickety-Clack" and hyphenated words were considered as one word. Thanks for the feedback - so glad you enjoyed! Have a great day!
