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Quantum Leap Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
Quantum Leap is one of my favorite television shows. I like your twist but sometimes the changes you make have adverse ripple effects, that's why you need Al. There's a 97% chance that a lot of species will go extinct because you killed their food source. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Quantum Leap is one of my favorite television shows. I like your twist but sometimes the changes you make have adverse ripple effects, that's why you need Al. There's a 97% chance that a lot of species will go extinct because you killed their food source. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Lol. Maybe. Thank you for the great review and stars, Earl.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a very nice work; I have enjoyed the read; wish you a winner in the contest; I have given better expressions to your inexpressive expressions. ALCREATOR
Inexpressive expressions:
1. Our elite team of leapers are (is) hand chosen to change history
2. I gave him a thumbs (thumps) up
3. I offered any (delete) and all people to come aboard and join us (pause) (make a new sentence) which was (you may write it was and start a new sentence)
4. you bloodsucking spawn (spawns) of
5. Mission complete. (!)
ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is a very nice work; I have enjoyed the read; wish you a winner in the contest; I have given better expressions to your inexpressive expressions. ALCREATOR
Inexpressive expressions:
1. Our elite team of leapers are (is) hand chosen to change history
2. I gave him a thumbs (thumps) up
3. I offered any (delete) and all people to come aboard and join us (pause) (make a new sentence) which was (you may write it was and start a new sentence)
4. you bloodsucking spawn (spawns) of
5. Mission complete. (!)
ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and suggestions, Alcreator. I'll see what I can do. I really appreciate the generous stars, Al. Have a great weekend.
