Noah Mission Log: 38.914
Quantum Leap Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
This is delightful. You negotiated time and travel beautifully plausible. Too bad the fix didn't work. Heck, I wanted to go too! Great job on this story. You deserve to win!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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This is delightful. You negotiated time and travel beautifully plausible. Too bad the fix didn't work. Heck, I wanted to go too! Great job on this story. You deserve to win!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Beverly. I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked my little tale of being Noah. Lol. Have a great day.
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Ron
Comment from Tina Crute
This is so creative! I did not see that ending coming!
Thanks for killing the mosquito, even if for pretend! This is a great entry for the contest! I wish you luck!
Tina
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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This is so creative! I did not see that ending coming!
Thanks for killing the mosquito, even if for pretend! This is a great entry for the contest! I wish you luck!
Tina
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Tina. I'm glad you liked my silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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Silly is good and welcome!!
Comment from Ayan3
That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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That was an amazing piece of writing and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this writing.
Sincerely, Ayan
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Ayan. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Hope you have a great day.
Comment from RShipp
'Our elite team of leapers' --- I loved that phrase!
'...smelled of llama.' Hahahha
Oh, if only those mosquitoes had NOT made the trip!! Enjoyed!!!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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'Our elite team of leapers' --- I loved that phrase!
'...smelled of llama.' Hahahha
Oh, if only those mosquitoes had NOT made the trip!! Enjoyed!!!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, RS. Yeah, I was hoping more people would catch the llama line but what can you do? I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a good one.
Comment from zanya
A very intriguing and interesting item for the Quantum Leap contest - with color and detail suggesting the era - and then the almost imperceptible movement that changed the course of history
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A very intriguing and interesting item for the Quantum Leap contest - with color and detail suggesting the era - and then the almost imperceptible movement that changed the course of history
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, zanya. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from writer723
Your story was very interesting. I felt like I was watching an episode of the show, 'Quantum Leap'. You drew me in quite well and held my interest right up to the end. Then you surprised me with an unexpected twist. LOL! I like the idea of getting rid of mosquitoes. I'd also throw in fleas, ticks, scorpions, and flies, for my part. LOL! I'm sure God has a purpose for all of these insects. But I'm just not sure what it is. And don't even get me started on rats. You did a great job with this tale!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Your story was very interesting. I felt like I was watching an episode of the show, 'Quantum Leap'. You drew me in quite well and held my interest right up to the end. Then you surprised me with an unexpected twist. LOL! I like the idea of getting rid of mosquitoes. I'd also throw in fleas, ticks, scorpions, and flies, for my part. LOL! I'm sure God has a purpose for all of these insects. But I'm just not sure what it is. And don't even get me started on rats. You did a great job with this tale!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Lol. Yeah, I couldn't have him killing off all those little monsters we hate. Haha. Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, writer. I'm glad you liked this silly little story.
Comment from royowen
Well done, I liked this very interesting analogy of how the mission was excepted and carried out by a "quantum leader," and subsequently built the mighty ark, took in all the animals, but in this version, he saves mankind from diseased damnation, well done, good luck, fabulously imaginative, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Well done, I liked this very interesting analogy of how the mission was excepted and carried out by a "quantum leader," and subsequently built the mighty ark, took in all the animals, but in this version, he saves mankind from diseased damnation, well done, good luck, fabulously imaginative, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Roy. He really actually went through all of this just so there wouldn't be mosquitos now. I just took the ending a little over the top. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked my little story. Have a great weekend.
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I did, it was great.
Comment from LyndaS
So glad I saved a sixer for this. There are only two things I hate. I HATE to be cold (that's why I live in Florida) and I HATE mosquitoes. I am allergic to them. I don't get mosquito bites. I get mosquito welts. Large ones. I never go out without dousing myself in bug spray. I would have erected a bronze statue to this leaper for his mankind contribution.
This is a great little story that is very funny. Well written with a hilarious ending. I loved it. Extremely well done! Lynda
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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So glad I saved a sixer for this. There are only two things I hate. I HATE to be cold (that's why I live in Florida) and I HATE mosquitoes. I am allergic to them. I don't get mosquito bites. I get mosquito welts. Large ones. I never go out without dousing myself in bug spray. I would have erected a bronze statue to this leaper for his mankind contribution.
This is a great little story that is very funny. Well written with a hilarious ending. I loved it. Extremely well done! Lynda
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Haha. Yes, I hate those little buggers too. I think we'd all be better off without them. Lol. Someone mentioned that different species might go extinct because the blood suckers are their food. I'd have to say, "Oh well." Lol. Bummer about the welts. Sorry to hear that. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Lynda. So far, it seems you're the only one that found the ending humorous like I had intended. What can you do? I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and kind comments, L. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. I hope you have yourself a wonderful weekend.
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Any thyme. And here I was going to tell you to have a wonderful weekend too. Two great minds... : ~ O
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Haha. Love the smiley face. I changed one word of the ending. I think people were reading it as mankind being saved from disease the mosquitos were going to bring. Hopefully people will actually get it now. Lol
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Another classic post. Have fun with it this weekend. Good luck with the family. You get to show off all your work. So proud of you! 👍
Comment from RodG
I am intrigued by the agency M.A.S.Q.U.E. the narrator works for and how quickly you introduced him and his mission. I also like how he was reduced to just his subconscious to get him back in time. Interesting that he could live 100 years and still work. A clever ending to your story I found most satisfying. Well done! Rod
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I am intrigued by the agency M.A.S.Q.U.E. the narrator works for and how quickly you introduced him and his mission. I also like how he was reduced to just his subconscious to get him back in time. Interesting that he could live 100 years and still work. A clever ending to your story I found most satisfying. Well done! Rod
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Rod. Yeah, after he accomplishes him mission he comes back right where his life left off when first leaped. Lol. From what the bible and research says, it took nearly that long to build it. Noah was already 500 years old when he first started the project. Then lived like 300 more after. But, yes, I'm sure my guy was pretty tired when he got back. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great and creative story! I enjoyed how the main character had leaped into Noah's body. You gave a view of Noah's Ark through the eyes of a Quatum Leaper which is very creative.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I think that you wrote a great and creative story! I enjoyed how the main character had leaped into Noah's body. You gave a view of Noah's Ark through the eyes of a Quatum Leaper which is very creative.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Jeffrey. That is actually the requirements of the contest, that you quantum leap into someone of a historical event and change things. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this piece.