Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "World Revolves 'Round Him"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
18 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Oh my gosh... Finally I can see the precious Atticus (love the name!) you speak so fondly of! This is written straight from the heart... Clear to me you adore every hair on his handsome head! --Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Oh my gosh... Finally I can see the precious Atticus (love the name!) you speak so fondly of! This is written straight from the heart... Clear to me you adore every hair on his handsome head! --Karenina
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
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You are most deservedly welcome!--Karenina
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Gotta share: when I first read the title, I thought it would be about some 'self-serving' guy, but what a wonderful (and handsome!) surprise this one turned out to be, Marival -- and you can certainly let Atticus know I said that about him!! ;) :) Thanx for this 'add-on smile' to the Renga today! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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LOL! Gotta share: when I first read the title, I thought it would be about some 'self-serving' guy, but what a wonderful (and handsome!) surprise this one turned out to be, Marival -- and you can certainly let Atticus know I said that about him!! ;) :) Thanx for this 'add-on smile' to the Renga today! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from Bichon
This was a very sweet poem, my friend! It seems you and your grandson are close, and that is very endearing. I think we all thought the world was ours at some point! Very cute picture
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This was a very sweet poem, my friend! It seems you and your grandson are close, and that is very endearing. I think we all thought the world was ours at some point! Very cute picture
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from RShipp
What a great picture-
Wasn't life grand when the world really did revolve around you!
Too many in the world- 20+-ers seem to think that it still does?
Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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What a great picture-
Wasn't life grand when the world really did revolve around you!
Too many in the world- 20+-ers seem to think that it still does?
Enjoyed!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing Atticus with us in this poem and the cute photograph--he looks like he's in charge! I enjoyed your 5-7-5 addition to this renga. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing Atticus with us in this poem and the cute photograph--he looks like he's in charge! I enjoyed your 5-7-5 addition to this renga. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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How did you know? LoL he knows he is in charge. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my 5/7/5. I hope you give it a try when you're up to it. It's fun. Have a great weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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He's certainly at the right age to be in charge. Thanks for encouragement to join in a renga one day. More smiles- Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the little gentleman who has his grandma around his little finger and he takes good advantage of her tender heart. He seems like a real cutie.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the little gentleman who has his grandma around his little finger and he takes good advantage of her tender heart. He seems like a real cutie.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Sandra, he is a cutie :) have a great weekend.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and it's expected when you're a child, but not so much when you're the seventy-something President of the United States of America
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and it's expected when you're a child, but not so much when you're the seventy-something President of the United States of America
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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LoL Trump really is a man baby...gross.
Thank you very much for your review and feedback. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Kids are so focused in the moment and we can learn a lot about how they behave and apply it to our own life. Clear our minds and stay in the moment, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Kids are so focused in the moment and we can learn a lot about how they behave and apply it to our own life. Clear our minds and stay in the moment, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from ESOSTINE
That is how it goes with children. They would always believe that they come first and everything/one else is secondary. And we care much due to their vulnerability. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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That is how it goes with children. They would always believe that they come first and everything/one else is secondary. And we care much due to their vulnerability. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your valuable time and review.
Gypsy
Comment from lightink
So, this is your personal trainer? ;)
What a precious little face! And the look he gives you!
You describe how energetic he is....how it can impact you...but ultimately both you and he knows that the world indeed revolves around him...
which means he IS loved right :).
Thank you for sharing the joy!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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So, this is your personal trainer? ;)
What a precious little face! And the look he gives you!
You describe how energetic he is....how it can impact you...but ultimately both you and he knows that the world indeed revolves around him...
which means he IS loved right :).
Thank you for sharing the joy!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Jyoti, for your valuable time and review.
Hugs,
Gypsy