Seasons
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written beautiful twenty-line poem about the four seasons and how they all fit perfectly together in sequence and at the right time they bring their beauty and their ugly.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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A very well-written beautiful twenty-line poem about the four seasons and how they all fit perfectly together in sequence and at the right time they bring their beauty and their ugly.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your poetic description of each season, BL. I enjoyed reading your fashion show starring the seasons. Your words are well-chosen and are filled with great imagery.
The picture is a perfect choice, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I like your poetic description of each season, BL. I enjoyed reading your fashion show starring the seasons. Your words are well-chosen and are filled with great imagery.
The picture is a perfect choice, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the fashion show here Trisha with all the colours through the seasons and of course my favourite is spring and summer, although the autumn colours are vibrant and winter brings the Christmas lights, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed the fashion show here Trisha with all the colours through the seasons and of course my favourite is spring and summer, although the autumn colours are vibrant and winter brings the Christmas lights, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed my poem. My favorite season is Autumn, but I get nostalgic for what was home . Thanks for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Bucketlist your free verse 20 lines--
Seasons Fashion Show. With your beautiful descriptive colorful words. I smiled at-- when you said that---
Winter, is a mature fashion show. when 'snow flakes' gather to Blanket the frozen brown earth.
Sounds like the beautiful winters we have in Vermont.
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Smiles to you Bucketlist your free verse 20 lines--
Seasons Fashion Show. With your beautiful descriptive colorful words. I smiled at-- when you said that---
Winter, is a mature fashion show. when 'snow flakes' gather to Blanket the frozen brown earth.
Sounds like the beautiful winters we have in Vermont.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome Buckelist
Gert
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely poem about seasons. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage (or maybe the runway) for your words. This very nicely done.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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This is a lovely poem about seasons. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage (or maybe the runway) for your words. This very nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your very kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
I love the way you presented the season in a fashion show, each one described so beautifully. I never thought of winter as a mature season, but now, I'll think of it every winter.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I love the way you presented the season in a fashion show, each one described so beautifully. I never thought of winter as a mature season, but now, I'll think of it every winter.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a very nicely written 20 line poem, each season has its own distinct order and type of fashion for human beings to enjoy; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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This is a very nicely written 20 line poem, each season has its own distinct order and type of fashion for human beings to enjoy; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH for a six, I love the total way you took us so easily from one season of total imagery to another. this is a high contender and one that i would vote first if i could.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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OH for a six, I love the total way you took us so easily from one season of total imagery to another. this is a high contender and one that i would vote first if i could.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written free verse that uses color, imagery and metaphor to describe the different stages of one tree through out the year. Fashion styles is a good metaphor.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy.
dp
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is a well written free verse that uses color, imagery and metaphor to describe the different stages of one tree through out the year. Fashion styles is a good metaphor.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy.
dp
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you dp, I am just recuperating from major surgery, so keeping healthy is on the books! Thanks for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
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Don't mention it, Trisha.
Joan
Comment from Mimi Linny
I love the parallels used to compare the four seasons to the models on a runway! It's fun, imaginative and creates a beautiful pallet showing off Mother Nature's brilliant, yearly colors! Wonderful entry for the 20 line poem! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I love the parallels used to compare the four seasons to the models on a runway! It's fun, imaginative and creates a beautiful pallet showing off Mother Nature's brilliant, yearly colors! Wonderful entry for the 20 line poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your complimentary review and six stars! You added a positive note to my day .
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome! And very well deserved!
