Where Parchment Waits
Seven Word contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem writing prompt contest. Excellent topic very relatable. You said so much in a few words. Well done!!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem writing prompt contest. Excellent topic very relatable. You said so much in a few words. Well done!!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Gypsy. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have yourself a great day.
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Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I did not see the pen poking the eye. I saw a metaphor. The writing of one's pain makes the reader cry along with the writer of the poem or prose. Sometimes I have had tearstains on my writing when I journaled. The red here could symbolize life's blood disappointments.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I did not see the pen poking the eye. I saw a metaphor. The writing of one's pain makes the reader cry along with the writer of the poem or prose. Sometimes I have had tearstains on my writing when I journaled. The red here could symbolize life's blood disappointments.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and for getting the metaphor, Liz. I appreciate the stars.
Comment from RShipp
I love the artwork. And I did not think the quill was poking. Beautiful!
A perfect picture for your poem.
Best of luck in the Seven Words or Less Poem writing contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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I love the artwork. And I did not think the quill was poking. Beautiful!
A perfect picture for your poem.
Best of luck in the Seven Words or Less Poem writing contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, RS. I actually went in and added a little more to the pic so it looks better now. I just haven't taken out the author noted yet. I appreciate the stars, friend. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from victor 66
However this illustration was taken in perspective, the words still ring true and seem most poetic. I thought this was very skillfully and artfully done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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However this illustration was taken in perspective, the words still ring true and seem most poetic. I thought this was very skillfully and artfully done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and generous stars, Victor. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are most welcome and it was my pleasure.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seven word poem. We use the quill to clean up our bleeding heart. That us the best way to find peace in your heart and soul when you write about what is bothering your mind.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A very well-written seven word poem. We use the quill to clean up our bleeding heart. That us the best way to find peace in your heart and soul when you write about what is bothering your mind.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem is a great entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem writing prompt. There is great truth in a few words. I see it as you painted it--quill over the eye, not poking it. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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This poem is a great entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem writing prompt. There is great truth in a few words. I see it as you painted it--quill over the eye, not poking it. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Rebecca. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Let those words touch the page and stay forever as the quill bleeds with either joy or sorrow. Your words resonated with me as we write, write, write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Let those words touch the page and stay forever as the quill bleeds with either joy or sorrow. Your words resonated with me as we write, write, write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
A wonderful use of only seven words to create and send a powerful message to writers and readers. I usually do not comment one's artwork, but your chosen artwork is stunning!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
A wonderful use of only seven words to create and send a powerful message to writers and readers. I usually do not comment one's artwork, but your chosen artwork is stunning!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Diane. I actually took a few different pictures from google images and used my art program to come up with this. I usually spend more time creating a picture to use than the words I wrote. Lol. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Thank you again.
Comment from LyndaS
You made excellent use of your seven words. This is a very different way to encourage a poet to follow their heart when writing. Beautiful art you created to go with it. Very well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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You made excellent use of your seven words. This is a very different way to encourage a poet to follow their heart when writing. Beautiful art you created to go with it. Very well done. Lynda
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Lynda. You made my day. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
The artwork certainly has set the stage for the words that followed. Our pens can do many things. Best of luck in the seven words or less contest. Best regards.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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The artwork certainly has set the stage for the words that followed. Our pens can do many things. Best of luck in the seven words or less contest. Best regards.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Kermit.
