Wishful Thinking
Read slowly... sensually... wistfully...21 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. I like it. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. I like it. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables in this descriptive,
expressive, romantic piece. Describing dreams as a place where one may be found is very effective.
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You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables in this descriptive,
expressive, romantic piece. Describing dreams as a place where one may be found is very effective.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you Janice!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a lovely love poem with an amazing picture. The scenery and the atmosphere are awe inspiring. I read it three times and feel the sensuality. I want to ask: why can't it be real?
I have a weakness for love poems. That's why I call this an Exceptionally good poem.
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What a lovely love poem with an amazing picture. The scenery and the atmosphere are awe inspiring. I read it three times and feel the sensuality. I want to ask: why can't it be real?
I have a weakness for love poems. That's why I call this an Exceptionally good poem.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Oh, Lisa, I am so very glad that someone out there seems to have read it as I wrote it -- quite non-traditional for this restricted format but I let the muse go where they wanted on this one! Thank you so very much for your lovely comments and those shining stars!! Have a great weekend out there!
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Yes. A tough contest.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-10-2 poem with a romantic fairytale touch, to find someone where dreams begin holding he heart of each other and proclaim their love forever.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 2-10-2 poem with a romantic fairytale touch, to find someone where dreams begin holding he heart of each other and proclaim their love forever.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A romantic and deeply emotion love as two lovers are devoted and proclaim their love for each other, much enjoyed, a fine, loving presentation, love Dolly x
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A romantic and deeply emotion love as two lovers are devoted and proclaim their love for each other, much enjoyed, a fine, loving presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Edward Escobar
Fantastic. I instantly fell in love with this wonderful, heart stopping verse. To me like a love song and a night under the stars. That word, love. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Fantastic. I instantly fell in love with this wonderful, heart stopping verse. To me like a love song and a night under the stars. That word, love. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Eternal Muse
You have an award winning presentation here and the artwork is just adorable. This should be a major contender in that contest, and I wish you luck in the booths. This was a beauty.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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You have an award winning presentation here and the artwork is just adorable. This should be a major contender in that contest, and I wish you luck in the booths. This was a beauty.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Wow, thank you so much!
Comment from Ben B.
Judging by the title I'm guessing that this is just a fantasy and it didn't actually happen. This is a very beautiful and sensual poem. You picked the right picture for the tempo you were looking for.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Judging by the title I'm guessing that this is just a fantasy and it didn't actually happen. This is a very beautiful and sensual poem. You picked the right picture for the tempo you were looking for.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Ben!
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Very nice. Reading slowly and thinking does make this piece beautiful. A person who knows the type of person they are longing for. A thoughtful, warm, loving individual who will stay. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Very nice. Reading slowly and thinking does make this piece beautiful. A person who knows the type of person they are longing for. A thoughtful, warm, loving individual who will stay. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a romantic poem -
Within
life's troubled din
Hope fuels dreams to begin. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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What a romantic poem -
Within
life's troubled din
Hope fuels dreams to begin. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
