Wishful Thinking
Read slowly... sensually... wistfully...21 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Ah, a bit of romantic abandon... I'm a sucker for a nice romance vignette...and you provide it in the thinnest of criteria... 2-10-2! I daresay if you added on I'd be seeing your novel in the romance aisle! I was not online and so could not have voted...but congratulations on your well deserved win!--Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Ah, a bit of romantic abandon... I'm a sucker for a nice romance vignette...and you provide it in the thinnest of criteria... 2-10-2! I daresay if you added on I'd be seeing your novel in the romance aisle! I was not online and so could not have voted...but congratulations on your well deserved win!--Karenina
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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So good to hear from you, Karenina! ;) Thanx for your review here, my lady! :) Take care out there as summer closes and Fall rolls in this month! ;) Yvette
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I adore Fall so am happy as a clam that the days are getting shorter and every third day or so we get a cool breeze whispering of Summer packing up for the year!--Karenina
Comment from victor 66
I always appreciate poetry about love and romance. That's what makes our lives the most interesting and the most rewarding. I think the vast majority of us, hope for this emotion from another person. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I always appreciate poetry about love and romance. That's what makes our lives the most interesting and the most rewarding. I think the vast majority of us, hope for this emotion from another person. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
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You are most welcome, Yvette.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 2-10-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 2-10-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dick Waters
Very nicely done. The picture is perfect for the poem. You caught the time when life was simpler and more innocent.
Good luck in the contest. Lots of entries for this contest.
Dick
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Very nicely done. The picture is perfect for the poem. You caught the time when life was simpler and more innocent.
Good luck in the contest. Lots of entries for this contest.
Dick
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from RShipp
So much wished passion in so few words.
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Please write three lines with a syllable count of 2, then 10, then 2.
Best of luck in the 2-10-2 Poem contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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So much wished passion in so few words.
I believe you have met the requirements of this contest: Please write three lines with a syllable count of 2, then 10, then 2.
Best of luck in the 2-10-2 Poem contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Ah, such a sweet theme and message. In your dreams you can and often do find your perfect companion. The time you have are... well, perfect or as perfect as imagination can make them.
Well crafted and good presentation.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Ah, such a sweet theme and message. In your dreams you can and often do find your perfect companion. The time you have are... well, perfect or as perfect as imagination can make them.
Well crafted and good presentation.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the image you have gong with this poem. This piece leaves love up to the other party to come and look. Do not sit still, it tells the rear. Search and you shall recieve.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I love the image you have gong with this poem. This piece leaves love up to the other party to come and look. Do not sit still, it tells the rear. Search and you shall recieve.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the 2-10-2 poetry writing prompt. This sweet truth is right on the mark. I sure hope it does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is a great entry for the 2-10-2 poetry writing prompt. This sweet truth is right on the mark. I sure hope it does well in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a lovely poem. It is so positive. It is nice to read something so light. For a change no neglect or abuse intimated, no one dying or sick. Just sweet caring.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is a lovely poem. It is so positive. It is nice to read something so light. For a change no neglect or abuse intimated, no one dying or sick. Just sweet caring.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
Great pairing of picture to poem! I also like how the first and last lines are bold and bigger because it takes us from "Find me" to being found! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Great pairing of picture to poem! I also like how the first and last lines are bold and bigger because it takes us from "Find me" to being found! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
