Lights of Peace
4.8.4 poem11 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like this piece cause it promotes a soft spokeness of people. We can take the time to look out at the world at night and see the lights that provide us with sight and take the time to feel peaceful.
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I like this piece cause it promotes a soft spokeness of people. We can take the time to look out at the world at night and see the lights that provide us with sight and take the time to feel peaceful.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Think I'm gonna stick to the twinkling stars to play that role...! Such a wonderful offering for the unusual-count contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
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Think I'm gonna stick to the twinkling stars to play that role...! Such a wonderful offering for the unusual-count contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 4-8-4 poem. When the lights of the city comes on at night our mood changes and we forget about the day's stress and just we enjoy the calmness the s ok ft light.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 4-8-4 poem. When the lights of the city comes on at night our mood changes and we forget about the day's stress and just we enjoy the calmness the s ok ft light.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thanks very much for your review
Comment from Liz O'Neill
At night when theings are quiet and there is just twinkling, worries are set aside and peace takes over and hopefully the world can sleep for the night rested to greet the daylight ready to do it all over again.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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At night when theings are quiet and there is just twinkling, worries are set aside and peace takes over and hopefully the world can sleep for the night rested to greet the daylight ready to do it all over again.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely chosen words - alliteration (worries world) and consonance (replaced peace) and the rhyme of "night lights" all contribute to make this a lovely little peace. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Nicely chosen words - alliteration (worries world) and consonance (replaced peace) and the rhyme of "night lights" all contribute to make this a lovely little peace. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Patty Palmer
It does seem when you see the lights all over the city and cars on the streets, that it gives a peaceful feeling. The world moving along happily as it should. Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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It does seem when you see the lights all over the city and cars on the streets, that it gives a peaceful feeling. The world moving along happily as it should. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Bill Schott
This 4-8-4, Lights of Peace, has the right set up and finds comfort in the glowing citadel in the evening. Behind the bright lights a city sleeps and dreams of tomorrow.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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This 4-8-4, Lights of Peace, has the right set up and finds comfort in the glowing citadel in the evening. Behind the bright lights a city sleeps and dreams of tomorrow.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thanks a lot for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the 4-8-4 writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good flow. It's the best one in the contest, so far.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the 4-8-4 writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good flow. It's the best one in the contest, so far.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the very positive review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the 4-8-4 Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the 4-8-4 Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Earl Corp
Your 4-8-4 poem made sense, though I think some people dread the falling of darkness and don't find it peaceful. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Your 4-8-4 poem made sense, though I think some people dread the falling of darkness and don't find it peaceful. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
