Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Passage"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ciao, Bella Donna,
You did a great job with the couplet chapter for our Renga book. Children are our future, you are right. Well done!
Abbracci,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Ciao, Bella Donna,
You did a great job with the couplet chapter for our Renga book. Children are our future, you are right. Well done!
Abbracci,
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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️️Ciao Gypsy,
Thank you for the kind response and for the help.
I really enjoyed our chat ( smile)!
Anch'io ti mando un caloroso abbraccio e ti auguro un bel fine settimana!
Ciao!
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grazie mille, abbracci
Comment from judiverse
This will be a wonderful addition to the Ringa book. Your syllable count is correct and the picture is adorable, and your thought about children is beautifully expressed. They are our future. It is troubling to think of the problems they will face as adults, though, in a more and more complex world. What they have to learn is so great compared to what I had to learn when I was a child. Excellent work. judi
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This will be a wonderful addition to the Ringa book. Your syllable count is correct and the picture is adorable, and your thought about children is beautifully expressed. They are our future. It is troubling to think of the problems they will face as adults, though, in a more and more complex world. What they have to learn is so great compared to what I had to learn when I was a child. Excellent work. judi
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very nice Renga, with terrific imagery and visuals. You packed volumes in these lines. I like your artistic presentation and artwork. Thank you for educating us in your author notes.
I really liked this.
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A very nice Renga, with terrific imagery and visuals. You packed volumes in these lines. I like your artistic presentation and artwork. Thank you for educating us in your author notes.
I really liked this.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An endearing and loving write about fresh faced children who will shape our future and we leave the world in their hands. I enjoyed the hope and belief in these words, love Dolly x
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An endearing and loving write about fresh faced children who will shape our future and we leave the world in their hands. I enjoyed the hope and belief in these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
A few words which speak a ton.....very well written and very well thought out...I appreciate how wisely you have chosen your words. It helps in the flow of the poem....Thanks for Sharing!
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A few words which speak a ton.....very well written and very well thought out...I appreciate how wisely you have chosen your words. It helps in the flow of the poem....Thanks for Sharing!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020