Hopefulness
For you are mine...19 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Expectation, hope, want, need, you captured the meaning of the feeling well. You met the criteria and just knowing someone is there can be comforting. Like a wife hearing her husband snore.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Expectation, hope, want, need, you captured the meaning of the feeling well. You met the criteria and just knowing someone is there can be comforting. Like a wife hearing her husband snore.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review today.
Comment from Markie Doczi
I like this poem, and feel like it could have a dual meaning. It could refer to pillow talk between two lovers, or to a person still feeling the presence of their lost love one.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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I like this poem, and feel like it could have a dual meaning. It could refer to pillow talk between two lovers, or to a person still feeling the presence of their lost love one.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To not feel alone is something we often strive for as we fall into hopelessness in abandonment. Your words are hopeful and warm and nurturing here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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To not feel alone is something we often strive for as we fall into hopelessness in abandonment. Your words are hopeful and warm and nurturing here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this beautiful piece. Thanks for the smile it gave me; what a lovely sentiment. Stay healthy and safe during this depressing pandemic! Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Congratulations on this beautiful piece. Thanks for the smile it gave me; what a lovely sentiment. Stay healthy and safe during this depressing pandemic! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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So very glad you found a smile here - my mission is complete! Thank you for your review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hope dressed and addressed so nicely in this poem:"
Even in darkness
laughter is heard, touch is felt
and I know you're there..."Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Hope dressed and addressed so nicely in this poem:"
Even in darkness
laughter is heard, touch is felt
and I know you're there..."Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Iza, for your review today!
Comment from stephybs
Lovely 5- 7 -5 charming and delightful, uplifting and warm. Really makes one smile. Word perfect and art work fits perfect. Well rewritten and thought through
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Lovely 5- 7 -5 charming and delightful, uplifting and warm. Really makes one smile. Word perfect and art work fits perfect. Well rewritten and thought through
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Steph, for your review today - sounds like you found a smile here today... HOORAY!
Comment from equestrik
Your writing is soft and tender speaking of love felt between two who are in love with no need to see. You writing goes well with the picture and lands softly.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Your writing is soft and tender speaking of love felt between two who are in love with no need to see. You writing goes well with the picture and lands softly.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, equestrik, for your review today!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Aw, this is a touching post in a 5-7-5 format. I just heard last week that someone from church who is about 8 years younger than I am is losing her eyesight. Her mother and family have been very devoted to her care. I hope she can still hear laughter, as her hearing is going, too. This is a great post.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Aw, this is a touching post in a 5-7-5 format. I just heard last week that someone from church who is about 8 years younger than I am is losing her eyesight. Her mother and family have been very devoted to her care. I hope she can still hear laughter, as her hearing is going, too. This is a great post.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Crystie - I did have someone specific in mind when I wrote it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 hope poem about the thingsc we cannot always see but we know they are it there whenever we need them we can either reach out or call and they are there.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 hope poem about the thingsc we cannot always see but we know they are it there whenever we need them we can either reach out or call and they are there.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Sandra!
