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Hopefulness

For you are mine...

19 total reviews 
Comment from Royette Dickenson
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Hey,
I love the poem. It is short but effective and definitely true. Laughter and touch are two very good medicines in most situations. It's a way to remind us that we're human!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Oh, Royette - THANK YOU!! Such a thoughtful and encouraging review - you've started my weekend out with a smile!! :) ;) May you find loads of stars to help you smile tonight and onward!! Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hi Yevette.

I looked at your profile page or wouldn't have seen this. My last two blind entry contest entries have gotten 2 and 3 reviews.

Hop has become a causality of the modern world. Good job in the contest. Congratulations.

DA Z

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Yeah, hard to garner much on the contest offerings, but they're perfect for the gal with no time on her hands...lol!! Looking forward to a regular routine next week! ;) Yvette
Comment from LisaMay
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Congratulations on your win. Your poem shows that although we might feel lost and alone, the knowledge of the presence of another who is there for us can be uplifting and reassuring, offering joy and comfort.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thanx so much, L-M -- this was a bit of 'role-playing' for me as it were... been a whole lotta gray 'round here lately. :/ :/ You take care of you down over there, my lady, and thanx again for the 'uplift'! ;) Yvette
Comment from Patty Palmer
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A really great poem! You put the words together so perfectly! How many times we say we feel lost but like you say, in the dark, laughter is heard, a touch is felt, and I know you are there! Great job!!
Patty

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Many thanks for your enthusiastic comments!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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To have something to hold onto in the darkness is a wonderful gift. When times are the bleakest that is when you need to feel the love of those around you the most. It is that love that gives you hope.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Many thanks for your thoughtful comments here!
Comment from RShipp
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Even the smallest touch is a welcomed in the isolation we are now in.

Well done.

I enojyed the read.

Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Hope writing contest.


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Many thanks for your thoughtful comments here!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Nice entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is beautiful. I like the topic of laughter and touch is so important.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Many thanks, Gypsy Blue.
Comment from lyenochka
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Great job in showing us that Hope is not dependent on current circumstances that we can see. Instead, it's knowledge and conviction that the One we trust is with us. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Many thanks for your wonderful comments today.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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That's an excellent way to look at and to express hope. The laughter and the touch of a loved one can bring comfort in times like these. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Many thanks, Jeffrey.
Comment from Jan26
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This is beautifully written, the artwork is perfect, and I love the multi-sensory elements as well.

Well done and thank you for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
    Thank you so very much for your review!