Whispers of Autumn
A seasonal 3-5-36 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Yes. The leaves of the maple across the street are turning already. And the geese are practicing formation over head most days now. I don't like to see it coming, but it is. All this is in whisper form, eh? Soon the air will take it over.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Yes. The leaves of the maple across the street are turning already. And the geese are practicing formation over head most days now. I don't like to see it coming, but it is. All this is in whisper form, eh? Soon the air will take it over.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Do appreciate your comments and rating. Thanks.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Love that you added a bit of rhyming spice... ;) This is a great offering for such a limited format contest here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Love that you added a bit of rhyming spice... ;) This is a great offering for such a limited format contest here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Truly appreciate your comments, along with wishes.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This poem speaks the truth, more and more each day we wake. There is a bit of snap in the air from overnight cooling. We have 70-80 degrees in these Vermont woods in the day, the 50's at night. Everything is quieting too as the poem predicts. Well written.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This poem speaks the truth, more and more each day we wake. There is a bit of snap in the air from overnight cooling. We have 70-80 degrees in these Vermont woods in the day, the 50's at night. Everything is quieting too as the poem predicts. Well written.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you. I much appreciate your comments.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This poem is beautifully presented. The text can be easily read by people with defective vision - perhaps just a slight contrast problem that means that the letters look a little blurred. However, they are well-sized which is a good start, and the image is stunning and will allow much imaginative reflection.
At the end of September, after a reflective technical piece, I am launching a multi-author book that will be suitable for visually impaired readers. Sort out your contrast query, and I would be delighted to have submission(s) from you.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This poem is beautifully presented. The text can be easily read by people with defective vision - perhaps just a slight contrast problem that means that the letters look a little blurred. However, they are well-sized which is a good start, and the image is stunning and will allow much imaginative reflection.
At the end of September, after a reflective technical piece, I am launching a multi-author book that will be suitable for visually impaired readers. Sort out your contrast query, and I would be delighted to have submission(s) from you.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Really appreciate your comments. Will work on straightening out contrast problem. Thanks.
Comment from zanya
Autumn's quiet arrival so beautifully and metaphorically described here though the format is a short one of 3-5-3 - and it's the change in the air that usually alerts us
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Autumn's quiet arrival so beautifully and metaphorically described here though the format is a short one of 3-5-3 - and it's the change in the air that usually alerts us
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you. Your comments and rating are most appreciated.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed your 3-5-3 poem.
Lovely imagery that is clear and easy to understand.
Autumn is definitely in the air - the subtle changes (like whispers) are making themselves felt.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Hello :)
I enjoyed your 3-5-3 poem.
Lovely imagery that is clear and easy to understand.
Autumn is definitely in the air - the subtle changes (like whispers) are making themselves felt.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you ever so much. I really appreciate your comments, your best wishes and the rating.
