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Glow of Hope

Hope 5-7-5

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is the crux of people's hope and how it ever glows. It can weather anything. Sometimes it does hide among the darkness for a while. But it surfaces and we can move on. Well expressed.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Hope is the one thing that we cannot afford to lose in all of this chaos... a wonderful offering for this contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) ;)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Yes indeed - hope is our way out of this crisis .zanya
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
It's sometimes hard to focus on hope when there's so much chaos obstructing our vision.
This is a well presented 5-7-5 poem.
I enjoyed your star metaphor and wish you good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Interesting observations -thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from mauial
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This is so true. The wise man, King Solomonsaid: Expectation postponed makes the heart sick . ( Ecclesiastes 13:12) But if we put on the hope of salvation as a helmet, it will protect us from doubt. ( see 1 Thessalonians 5:8)

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
    Thanks for sharing zanya