Comment from RShipp

Excellent

"Should I tell them no if offered more fries
or teeter from grace if I say yes instead?"
I loved this live!

A cute "gluttony" perspective.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020

Thank you for the excellent review, RS. Yeah, I had a blast writing this ridiculous piece. I'm glad you liked it. Have a good one.

Ron

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
This is so much fun!
Fab rhythm and rhyme and I really do think that you put your point across very well!
I love that you used the word 'fatties' - it's so childish and rude but it makes me giggle ;)
Good luck in the voting booth - my favourite so far...
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020

Thank you for the fantastic review, Debra. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Yeah, I chuckled when I thought of using 'fatties' too. Lol. Have yourself a great night.

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

This one makes me hungry! Practically perfect and picturesque poem capturing the "deadly" sin of "glorious food!" Nicely achieved rhyme and rhythm with each stanza showcasing a variety of wonderfully-descriptive, sinful pleasures. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020

Thank you for the fantastic review, Mimi. I really appreciate the generous stars. Yes, this one made me hungry too. Haha. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.

reply by Mimi Linny on 19-Aug-2020

You're welcome! Have a super day!