My Greatest Fear
We all have something we are afraid of.7 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job explaining your greatest fear. It was easy to follow your reasoning. Your words were filled with good imagery and smooth flow. Perhaps your description needs to read . . . afraid of (not in).
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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You did a great job explaining your greatest fear. It was easy to follow your reasoning. Your words were filled with good imagery and smooth flow. Perhaps your description needs to read . . . afraid of (not in).
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you for catching that and for your kind review.
Comment from RShipp
"In an attempt to take control of this fear, I began writing horror stories. I try to channel that fear of death into something useful." Wow! You are right. That is rather ironic.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the Your Greatest Fear writing contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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"In an attempt to take control of this fear, I began writing horror stories. I try to channel that fear of death into something useful." Wow! You are right. That is rather ironic.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the Your Greatest Fear writing contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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It is strange indeed. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story about fear, My Greatest Fear, touches on the one we all probably have-- the unknown of death. Having sensed and thought all our lives it is impossible to imagine nothingness.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This story about fear, My Greatest Fear, touches on the one we all probably have-- the unknown of death. Having sensed and thought all our lives it is impossible to imagine nothingness.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It sounds like you had a serious problem that perhaps you've overcame. The Lord is the only one that can give one peace and an assurance that their is something after this life. He gives you a living hope. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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It sounds like you had a serious problem that perhaps you've overcame. The Lord is the only one that can give one peace and an assurance that their is something after this life. He gives you a living hope. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a powerful entry for the Your Greatest Fear writing prompt. It is indeed a real situation for you, and one that you have to mentally guard against. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This is a powerful entry for the Your Greatest Fear writing prompt. It is indeed a real situation for you, and one that you have to mentally guard against. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Fear of dying is horrible. I've had to deal with this during some of my worst bouts with depression - and it's something that's hard to describe to people. I get it.
I saw a couple of nits here and made some notes for you:
1.) I am afraid of nothingness. I use(d) to cry alone in my room,
2.) it power over me and prevents me from living (while) I am still alive.
3.) to think that my fear of death is what (led) me to the path in life
Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Fear of dying is horrible. I've had to deal with this during some of my worst bouts with depression - and it's something that's hard to describe to people. I get it.
I saw a couple of nits here and made some notes for you:
1.) I am afraid of nothingness. I use(d) to cry alone in my room,
2.) it power over me and prevents me from living (while) I am still alive.
3.) to think that my fear of death is what (led) me to the path in life
Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review and for pointing out the errors.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This was a very honest piece of writing. I personally don't fear death, but the one thing I do fear above all else is time. It really scares me how quickly it moves and there's nothing we can do about it. A well written, engaging piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This was a very honest piece of writing. I personally don't fear death, but the one thing I do fear above all else is time. It really scares me how quickly it moves and there's nothing we can do about it. A well written, engaging piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Time does seem to move faster as you get older.
