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What Breaks My Heart

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Untold Heartache"
Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.

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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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We have come to that dispairing point now. The loss of countless jobs, the definite closure of many small businesses, more families than ever before losing their home, their savings and end inevitably in the streets. Covid-19 spares no one. And still...to me inexplicable, there are people carelessly organizing parties, hugging old friends they haven't seen in a long time, dance in the crowded discotheques, etc. "This doesn't affect me. Why should I bother? I am a free citizen, and do what pleases me". How extraordinary stupid and respectless!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    I agree with your comments. Thank you for reviewing and the rating.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 19-Aug-2020
    Welcome to the review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Brutality - Covid, Covid-Brutality - Job Loss. These are the new and scary realities of our lives. "Brutality rampant in the streets,
Covid Nineteen is most everywhere;
demanding life must alter its beat,
excluding no one in its despair
while many jobs have thus disappeared." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for reviewing, as well as the good luck and rating.