Trust Me You'll Enjoy The View
They Can Kill You But They Can't Eat You16 total reviews
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I'm not a particular fan of heights as well. When I'm flying, I only really feel relaxed again when we're back down on the ground. I know that flying's very safe but it still makes me nervous. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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I'm not a particular fan of heights as well. When I'm flying, I only really feel relaxed again when we're back down on the ground. I know that flying's very safe but it still makes me nervous. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a wonderful entry in this contest. Your right you should not let your fear stop you from doing things. You did what had to be done in spite of not liking heights and that speaks of the courage inside of you.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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This is a wonderful entry in this contest. Your right you should not let your fear stop you from doing things. You did what had to be done in spite of not liking heights and that speaks of the courage inside of you.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! What we will overcome when pressed by more 'important' issues (usually family), yeah?! ;) Think I know who this might be, but I'm not gonna 'peek'.... but very well offering for this contest with both seriousness and humor but driving the point home -- well done! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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LOL! What we will overcome when pressed by more 'important' issues (usually family), yeah?! ;) Think I know who this might be, but I'm not gonna 'peek'.... but very well offering for this contest with both seriousness and humor but driving the point home -- well done! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This biographical story is a real life experience about your fear of heights and later fear of some other thing grew; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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This biographical story is a real life experience about your fear of heights and later fear of some other thing grew; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
What a lovely story with the perfect picture accompanying it. The writing is very good and the ending about snakes made me laugh. There are some grammatical errors that need editing. First ,..."and I refused climb the rope in gym class." Should be I refused (to) climb... Second "What kind of paratrooper if you're scared of 60 feet?" Should be What kind of paratrooper (are you) if you're... Despite these two grammatical errors this is a very entertaining read that you penned here and still worthy of a 5 тн? review. Best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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What a lovely story with the perfect picture accompanying it. The writing is very good and the ending about snakes made me laugh. There are some grammatical errors that need editing. First ,..."and I refused climb the rope in gym class." Should be I refused (to) climb... Second "What kind of paratrooper if you're scared of 60 feet?" Should be What kind of paratrooper (are you) if you're... Despite these two grammatical errors this is a very entertaining read that you penned here and still worthy of a 5 тн? review. Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my story. I appreciate the editing tips.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written true story about your greatest fear. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you chose. I could not have gotten that high up with the plans to jump. That is really high to me. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This is a very well written true story about your greatest fear. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you chose. I could not have gotten that high up with the plans to jump. That is really high to me. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much Teri. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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you are so welcome my friend. Blessings, Teri
