Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Silken Sunrise"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding your couplet to this book of renga. Your ensemble is visually appealing with the color combination and selected artwork plus a bit of alliteration. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for adding your couplet to this book of renga. Your ensemble is visually appealing with the color combination and selected artwork plus a bit of alliteration. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your positive thoughts!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, please, please bring on the soothing sunrise! Your words, June, are a lovely invitation to an early morning of relaxation... wonderful 'follow-on' as well as premise - love it! ;) Thanx for sharing both! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Oh, please, please bring on the soothing sunrise! Your words, June, are a lovely invitation to an early morning of relaxation... wonderful 'follow-on' as well as premise - love it! ;) Thanx for sharing both! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Yes, we do need to relax- but life gets in the way...Lol
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
You and Gypsy have added many wonderful passages to this renga collaboration. Your 7-7 coincidently follows mine.
I enjoyed your warm rays caressing the eyes of a future. You also chose a nice photo to accompany your post.
Mark
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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June,
You and Gypsy have added many wonderful passages to this renga collaboration. Your 7-7 coincidently follows mine.
I enjoyed your warm rays caressing the eyes of a future. You also chose a nice photo to accompany your post.
Mark
Mark
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this addition- I really liked yours.
Comment from Cindy Decker
June,
Nice couplet. I like the words you've chosen: gently caress; awakening sleepy eyes. Excellent poem for the collection.,
Best of luck to you.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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June,
Nice couplet. I like the words you've chosen: gently caress; awakening sleepy eyes. Excellent poem for the collection.,
Best of luck to you.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, June,
Wow, you are getting very good at renga. This is a fantastic couplet. Thank you very much for adding the chapter and notes.
Thank you for editing the poem.
Hugs,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Hello, June,
Wow, you are getting very good at renga. This is a fantastic couplet. Thank you very much for adding the chapter and notes.
Thank you for editing the poem.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback! I have made the changes.
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Thank you very much, June. I changed my review. Everything looks good.
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, how beautiful.
I can only imagine the wonder of being so
close to the ocean, that I could hear it as I slept.
Or seeing the beauty of it at dawn.
Lovely Miss June,
blessings...
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Oh, how beautiful.
I can only imagine the wonder of being so
close to the ocean, that I could hear it as I slept.
Or seeing the beauty of it at dawn.
Lovely Miss June,
blessings...
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback!
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Have a wonderful Tuesday!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful presentation, June. I love the soothing image. It is perfect for your well-thought out words. Those words just float along like a dream. I could see everything as I read it. The color scheme is perfect, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This is a beautiful presentation, June. I love the soothing image. It is perfect for your well-thought out words. Those words just float along like a dream. I could see everything as I read it. The color scheme is perfect, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback!