Mood Altering Strategy
5-7-5 Don't be a grump. Let it go.14 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
These are definitely words to live by! But not easy ones ...
You have met the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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These are definitely words to live by! But not easy ones ...
You have met the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Mood Altering Strategy, has the right set up and suggests that forgiving others is a way to ease one's belabored soul.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This 5-7-5, Mood Altering Strategy, has the right set up and suggests that forgiving others is a way to ease one's belabored soul.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the last line of this piece, "remove resentment" the world would be a better place if we would do this. It would, or it could possibly, make us better and happier people.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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I like the last line of this piece, "remove resentment" the world would be a better place if we would do this. It would, or it could possibly, make us better and happier people.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review comments. Simmering resentment does keep us feeling unhappy... some things are hard to let go of, but worth the effort.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
What a sound piece of advice!
Easier said than done at times but it really does work :)
I enjoyed this 5-7-5. Nicely rhymed and well presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Hello :)
What a sound piece of advice!
Easier said than done at times but it really does work :)
I enjoyed this 5-7-5. Nicely rhymed and well presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thanks Debra!
Comment from MissMerri
This is some excellent advice couched in a small poem, presented in a cheerful yellow. It is fun because the lines rhyme, and there is certainly a message to heed, especially during these crazy, unpredictable days. I totally agree, it doesn't pay to harbor resentments or to let ugliness destroy your good humor. Thanks for the neat, meaningful poem, and good luck in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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This is some excellent advice couched in a small poem, presented in a cheerful yellow. It is fun because the lines rhyme, and there is certainly a message to heed, especially during these crazy, unpredictable days. I totally agree, it doesn't pay to harbor resentments or to let ugliness destroy your good humor. Thanks for the neat, meaningful poem, and good luck in the contest. MM
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
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This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that helps the flow. Good luck in the contest. I like the presentation and the the mood topic.
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Hello, anonymous,
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that helps the flow. Good luck in the contest. I like the presentation and the the mood topic.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about changing our mood as well as those around us when we smoke and greet others while walking around we change everyone to see the lighter side of life.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about changing our mood as well as those around us when we smoke and greet others while walking around we change everyone to see the lighter side of life.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent offering for the 5-7-5 and for life. I'm printing this out for my company right now.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal :))
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Excellent offering for the 5-7-5 and for life. I'm printing this out for my company right now.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
What a beautiful, easy, influencing thought for good, satisfactory and tension free living; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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What a beautiful, easy, influencing thought for good, satisfactory and tension free living; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
