Wrath Unleashed
One of the deadly sins8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful entry for the contest. You hit the nail on the head in every area. When I see the looting and assaults, I realize it went well past anything peaceful. This is full blown hatred of America and all Americans: white, black, red, or any color or creed. It's no matter to them. They are hell bent, filled with fury and wrath. When are these mayors and governors... politicians, going to call it what it is? Violent anarchy and the end of peaceful streets and communities for our future.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest. (Excellent entry and the winner, I hope.)
Sally xo
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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A wonderful entry for the contest. You hit the nail on the head in every area. When I see the looting and assaults, I realize it went well past anything peaceful. This is full blown hatred of America and all Americans: white, black, red, or any color or creed. It's no matter to them. They are hell bent, filled with fury and wrath. When are these mayors and governors... politicians, going to call it what it is? Violent anarchy and the end of peaceful streets and communities for our future.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest. (Excellent entry and the winner, I hope.)
Sally xo
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you. I've been so upset watching the news lately, that I've had to turn it off once in a while for my own peace of mind. I really appreciate hearing from you...thanks for reading.
Comment from Mimi Linny
This is very insightful piece and to me written from the heart. We are in a sad place in our society and we need to move forward to improve the lives of all... Great job on this entry for "Deadly Sins!"
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This is very insightful piece and to me written from the heart. We are in a sad place in our society and we need to move forward to improve the lives of all... Great job on this entry for "Deadly Sins!"
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you, I hope the tide turns soon. I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
I can definitely feel the anger now a days. Everyone is struggling and destroying things doesn't make it any better. You hit the nail on the head with this won. Worthy of a six star rating!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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I can definitely feel the anger now a days. Everyone is struggling and destroying things doesn't make it any better. You hit the nail on the head with this won. Worthy of a six star rating!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this fantastic review. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
This was an excellent entry into the Deadly Sins poetry contest. I agree wholeheartedly with the stance you take in your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This was an excellent entry into the Deadly Sins poetry contest. I agree wholeheartedly with the stance you take in your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you, that means a lot.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very good offering for the contest with a great rhyme scheme and easy flow even with the strong message -- great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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A very good offering for the contest with a great rhyme scheme and easy flow even with the strong message -- great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello, I enjoyed reading your rhymed poem about wrath. It's also well presented. I noticed a couple of typos that you may wish to edit before the voting booth opens - buisness (business) and speads (spreads)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Hello, I enjoyed reading your rhymed poem about wrath. It's also well presented. I noticed a couple of typos that you may wish to edit before the voting booth opens - buisness (business) and speads (spreads)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you for pointing out these errors, I corrected them. I really appreciate you letting me know, and for taking time to read my poem.
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You?re welcome :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
People today are all too eager to release their wrath without thinking and many live in regret afterwards. Taking stock and thinking things through before acting is something I was taught many years ago, it is a pity that the rest of the population has not learned its lesson too. A poignant write here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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People today are all too eager to release their wrath without thinking and many live in regret afterwards. Taking stock and thinking things through before acting is something I was taught many years ago, it is a pity that the rest of the population has not learned its lesson too. A poignant write here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, I appreciate it.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
So well said and so true, true, true, this world is in a chaotic state, /The news just bursts with trouble and negativity. And yes we are all in this together. The good will suffer with the bad. Am I the only one but is there times that you wish you could say, "TIME OUT!" to all this mess
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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So well said and so true, true, true, this world is in a chaotic state, /The news just bursts with trouble and negativity. And yes we are all in this together. The good will suffer with the bad. Am I the only one but is there times that you wish you could say, "TIME OUT!" to all this mess
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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I feel that way too. It upsets me to just watch the news at night. Thank you for reading.
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You also take care
