My Jog in the Park
5-7-5 Nature contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Typical... just when we are enjoying the outdoors and life in general, we step in some mucky deposit. Your poem offers us a dose of reality as a contrast to the usual sweet stuff.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Typical... just when we are enjoying the outdoors and life in general, we step in some mucky deposit. Your poem offers us a dose of reality as a contrast to the usual sweet stuff.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Lol. This is about how life goes sometimes. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. Yeah, all that sweet stuff is wearing mighty thin anymore.
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is hilarious. I think he became so caught in the beauty, he was not watching his steps. Thus, stepping in dog sh**.
Thank you for the chuckle. I needed it.
This offering will provide your readers/reviewers/voters much laughter.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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This is hilarious. I think he became so caught in the beauty, he was not watching his steps. Thus, stepping in dog sh**.
Thank you for the chuckle. I needed it.
This offering will provide your readers/reviewers/voters much laughter.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Poetic Friend. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a pretty clever and funny little poem that you penned here. The biggest problem for you is that it's not a 5-7-5 because there's only 15 syllables. That's two syllables short. I do believe that it's an easy fix and that you'll come up with something very creative. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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This is a pretty clever and funny little poem that you penned here. The biggest problem for you is that it's not a 5-7-5 because there's only 15 syllables. That's two syllables short. I do believe that it's an easy fix and that you'll come up with something very creative. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I'm an idiot. Lol. Thank you for the great review and for pointing out the goof, Bobby. I fixed it. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend. Thanks again.