Serenity
5-7-5 Nature entry8 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Nature Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Nature Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation. I like the pond nature theme. You got my vote.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation. I like the pond nature theme. You got my vote.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments.
Comment from lightink
Oh, I love those water bird wing sounds!
I like your H and S alliterations!
This is a very soothing poem with wonderful imagery - engaging multiple senses: Hearing, vision
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Oh, I love those water bird wing sounds!
I like your H and S alliterations!
This is a very soothing poem with wonderful imagery - engaging multiple senses: Hearing, vision
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments.
Comment from TommyWrites
It's funny...how a simple poem, written by a stranger, can fill you with a peace. The words, short, yet nevertheless deep, capture your readers attention. You grabbed my heart, and touched by soul with these words. This is a beautiful poem, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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It's funny...how a simple poem, written by a stranger, can fill you with a peace. The words, short, yet nevertheless deep, capture your readers attention. You grabbed my heart, and touched by soul with these words. This is a beautiful poem, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments.
Comment from Markie Doczi
This is lovely, and true. One of many examples of nature which can calm the spirit and heal the soul. My happy place at home is my hammock with mosquito netting canopied around it.
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This is lovely, and true. One of many examples of nature which can calm the spirit and heal the soul. My happy place at home is my hammock with mosquito netting canopied around it.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Oh how beautiful and serene is this piece. and I must say that the poem and the artwork accommodate and compliment each other. They are definitely a pair made to be together. I love it. I wish you much success in this 5-7-5
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Oh how beautiful and serene is this piece. and I must say that the poem and the artwork accommodate and compliment each other. They are definitely a pair made to be together. I love it. I wish you much success in this 5-7-5
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from LisaMay
Your presentation is gorgeous... evoking a lovely feeling of serenity with just the wingbeats to break the silence. Nature can indeed be very therapeutic.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Your presentation is gorgeous... evoking a lovely feeling of serenity with just the wingbeats to break the silence. Nature can indeed be very therapeutic.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write for the 5-7-5 nature poetry contest. I think the combination of the picture and your words work well together to portray a sense of peace.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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This is a good write for the 5-7-5 nature poetry contest. I think the combination of the picture and your words work well together to portray a sense of peace.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thank you for sharing your input.