Future Architecture 101
Thomas Edison & Steve Jobs passed with flying colors...14 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ha. It took me awhile to figure out your notes... And then, like a light bulb (a very slow, dim one, maybe on a dimmer switch--lol...) I got it. There really was a class such as the one your poem describes... Who knew? Not I. *smile*
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Ha. It took me awhile to figure out your notes... And then, like a light bulb (a very slow, dim one, maybe on a dimmer switch--lol...) I got it. There really was a class such as the one your poem describes... Who knew? Not I. *smile*
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much for the time and the review, my lady -- so good to hear from you down here!! ;) Take good care of yourself up there and revel in the little stuff (and tell Miss Priss hello!) ... ;) Yvette
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Always a pleasure, Yvette. xx
Comment from Ronni
Hi Yvette,
Profoundly innovative take on minds imaginative powers that sometimes
surpass current technology and take a giant leap into the reality
of futurity's realm, as if just peeking around the corner like and
ever inquisitive cat. Perfect picture catch, virtual kick start to senses!
Here again dear, you tip toe through stellar dimensions, mortal and
yet unseen and unknown. Your talent's "GPS"..semms is never off
duty or curiostiy tweking even the stars! thanks for sharing dear!
Love, blessings always, Ronni
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Hi Yvette,
Profoundly innovative take on minds imaginative powers that sometimes
surpass current technology and take a giant leap into the reality
of futurity's realm, as if just peeking around the corner like and
ever inquisitive cat. Perfect picture catch, virtual kick start to senses!
Here again dear, you tip toe through stellar dimensions, mortal and
yet unseen and unknown. Your talent's "GPS"..semms is never off
duty or curiostiy tweking even the stars! thanks for sharing dear!
Love, blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Well, if you wanted to make me feel good, you certainly did! I just wish I could find my motivation and even my spark, my lady -- a whole lot 'off' these days so these quick contests at least keep my hand in play... so to speak. (and, yeah, you're one of the 2 or 3 folks I say that to...) Determined to get rid of these damned gray clouds and find the sunshine soon - I so need it! :) Take care and thanx so much for the 'uplift' Yvette
Comment from CharR
I am not familiar with the class, but I do like poem. Especially that it is positive about the future and not dismal. Love the picture, and the black background with the bright colors. Fantasical!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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I am not familiar with the class, but I do like poem. Especially that it is positive about the future and not dismal. Love the picture, and the black background with the bright colors. Fantasical!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Wow - such a wonderful review, Char, and those stars are just amazing!! ;) Thank you so much! Be sure to stop by some time after the contest and have a Terrific Tuesday!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
10 fabulous, 'fantastical' words going on here. Great illustration. It amazes where you find all of these. I think your students must be awake all the time with these. Internal rhyme with 'Imagination' and 'foundation' too! Plus the f alliteration with 'foundation for fantastical' present. Nice share.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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10 fabulous, 'fantastical' words going on here. Great illustration. It amazes where you find all of these. I think your students must be awake all the time with these. Internal rhyme with 'Imagination' and 'foundation' too! Plus the f alliteration with 'foundation for fantastical' present. Nice share.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Crystie -- you have put a smile on this face today, my lady!! ;) And, don't worry, whether it be rhyme or otherwise, I do my best to keep their 'wondering' teen age minds on the math - lol! ;)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Wonderful entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count and connection between lines that helps the flow. Good luck in the contest. I like the presentation and the imagination topic.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Wonderful entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count and connection between lines that helps the flow. Good luck in the contest. I like the presentation and the imagination topic.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used your ten words wisely to convey the amazing truth about the fruitful imaginations of brilliant people throughout time. Powerful word choices
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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You have used your ten words wisely to convey the amazing truth about the fruitful imaginations of brilliant people throughout time. Powerful word choices
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten word poem about future architecture that will need a very active imagination to construct a fantastical construction of tomorrow's reality.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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A very well-written ten word poem about future architecture that will need a very active imagination to construct a fantastical construction of tomorrow's reality.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Ben B.
That's pretty straightforward. Though to be honest this is a pretty poor title for the poem: you didn't even mention architecture in it. Try picking something a little more general.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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That's pretty straightforward. Though to be honest this is a pretty poor title for the poem: you didn't even mention architecture in it. Try picking something a little more general.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The human brain can conjure up such magical moments in our imagination and construct poetry and stories that delight others and change our tomorrows, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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The human brain can conjure up such magical moments in our imagination and construct poetry and stories that delight others and change our tomorrows, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
