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Pages of Petals

10 word poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from Valerie Fish
Excellent
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Beautiful words, tells a story, I'm itching to know more, who owned the book, who were the roses from....
Lovely picture too, and like the alliteration in the title.
Good luck in the contest, you've got my vote

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    Superb review zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
Excellent
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This short and sweet and simple poem well meets the requirements for the writing prompt. The picture is elegant and a perfect complement to the well chosen words.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from ReeRee
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It is amazing how much emotion is in your ten words! Even without the photo background, the words convey a clear mental image to which any reader should relate.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    Thanks again for those twinkling stars zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-You have used
your ten words well.
-A good topic, along
with description of
the rose petals and
the "yellowed pages."
-Effective personification
as they tell the "tales of love."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
    Great review zanya
reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Aug-2020
    You are very welcome, zanya. I enjoy your writing!