Morals
2/6/2 poem4 total reviews
Comment from writer723
Your poem speaks volumes with just a few words. Our character can be shaped by our knowledge and experiences. These, in turn, help to develop our virtues. You expressed this sentiment quite well. Your words provide insight into the building blocks of morality.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Your poem speaks volumes with just a few words. Our character can be shaped by our knowledge and experiences. These, in turn, help to develop our virtues. You expressed this sentiment quite well. Your words provide insight into the building blocks of morality.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Hello again, my friend, I am delighted that you like the poem; I appreciate your time and the wonderful insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your selected artwork fits with your short syllable entry.
I wonder if there is noun-verb dislocation with 'foster'
There are different interpretations in my reading if 'foster' is a singular imperative. If so, them it gets capitalized and a period follows 'character.' Alternatives might be:
Knowledge
weaveS character, fosterS
virtues.
Knowledge
weaved character, fosterED
virtues.
Regardless, I like your poem idea.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Your selected artwork fits with your short syllable entry.
I wonder if there is noun-verb dislocation with 'foster'
There are different interpretations in my reading if 'foster' is a singular imperative. If so, them it gets capitalized and a period follows 'character.' Alternatives might be:
Knowledge
weaveS character, fosterS
virtues.
Knowledge
weaved character, fosterED
virtues.
Regardless, I like your poem idea.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Hello Mark, I appreciate your constructive comments; you see, English is not my mother tongue, so I am prone to make such errors; I thank you for the corrections.
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LOL.... I speak American English, but my spouse can converse in five!
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Any Indian language?
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Sorry, but I only watch Bollywood movies on Netflix. Namaste may be the most important word I learned.LOL
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
An important theme. Morals...integrety, honesty, respect and high ethics. Oh, and all so engraved in everybody's mind, and at the same time today so often neglected and forgotten. It is such a shame that today the monster "Money" seems to have taken the first place. Usurped as a moral, but in reality a false worm has found its way to make us think that wealth is the most important goal in life.
This 2-6-2 made me think.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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An important theme. Morals...integrety, honesty, respect and high ethics. Oh, and all so engraved in everybody's mind, and at the same time today so often neglected and forgotten. It is such a shame that today the monster "Money" seems to have taken the first place. Usurped as a moral, but in reality a false worm has found its way to make us think that wealth is the most important goal in life.
This 2-6-2 made me think.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Marjon my friend, I thank you for visiting and sharing your sublime insights, God bless you and please be safe, thank you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from TommyWrites
In five words, you got so much in it. In five words, you created something with deep meaning. If only the world could read this...
Great poem, great picture to match, great in general!
Thank you for sharing this piece.
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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In five words, you got so much in it. In five words, you created something with deep meaning. If only the world could read this...
Great poem, great picture to match, great in general!
Thank you for sharing this piece.
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your visit and am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you.