Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Wear a Mask"My book of poems and stories
12 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great advice Annie especially since that dreaded Corona virus keeps infecting people across our nation. Enjoyed the sing song nature of this piece it's a very short poem but very lyrical piece of poetry that i believe can also be utilized as a slogan or a chant. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Great advice Annie especially since that dreaded Corona virus keeps infecting people across our nation. Enjoyed the sing song nature of this piece it's a very short poem but very lyrical piece of poetry that i believe can also be utilized as a slogan or a chant. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this entry. Our parents knew what they were doing to keep us busy back then. We have to keep such a closer watch on our children these days. Times have changed, indeed.
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You're welcome Annie.
Comment from Markie Doczi
This poem is kind, it rhymes, and meets the contest requirements. However I hesitate when I see poetry about politics, and respectfully disagree. But no one has all the answers ð?¤·â??â??ï¸?
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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This poem is kind, it rhymes, and meets the contest requirements. However I hesitate when I see poetry about politics, and respectfully disagree. But no one has all the answers ð?¤·â??â??ï¸?
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Political? I think you may be on the wrong side of the coin there. This is a humanitarian post. I work the front lines, and if you could see the devastation the virus has taken in our elderly like I do, You may look at it differently. I am a RN. I do thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Very good advice. However, I do think 99% of us are doing just that, when we are with others. As far as the other 1% just don't go anywhere where they are.
Ralf
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Very good advice. However, I do think 99% of us are doing just that, when we are with others. As far as the other 1% just don't go anywhere where they are.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Wearing a mask for a long period of time is unhealthy but to keep us safe, we nurses have to do just that. It gets pretty hot in them also. Thanks for your review and comments. Hope we get a handle on this virus soon.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty word poem about wearing a mask in public is one thing we can do to stop the spread of the virus. On the other hand I read an article today that it is not healthy to wear one non-stop because you keep breathing your own breath. The only reason I wear a mask when I go to thelp shop is not to pay a fine of end up in jail.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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A very well-written twenty word poem about wearing a mask in public is one thing we can do to stop the spread of the virus. On the other hand I read an article today that it is not healthy to wear one non-stop because you keep breathing your own breath. The only reason I wear a mask when I go to thelp shop is not to pay a fine of end up in jail.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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I agree that wearing a mask for a long period of time is unhealthy but to keep us safe, we nurses have to do just that. It gets pretty hot in them also. Thanks for your review and comments. Hope we get a handle on this virus soon.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Good advice and it is compulsory here and you are fined if you don't wear one. The world has changed and now we can't recognise anyone, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Good advice and it is compulsory here and you are fined if you don't wear one. The world has changed and now we can't recognise anyone, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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I work in nursing and prevention from this desease is so critical. So many suffer needlessly. Thank you for reading and your review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You make a valid point in your contest entry. It is one's choice, mostly, to wear a mass or not. It is hard to understand why so many take chances and possibly infect others by not wearing a mask. Your 20 words flow well. I like the rhymes. Your image is a great pairing, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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You make a valid point in your contest entry. It is one's choice, mostly, to wear a mass or not. It is hard to understand why so many take chances and possibly infect others by not wearing a mask. Your 20 words flow well. I like the rhymes. Your image is a great pairing, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I avoid the unmasked when shopping and do not understand the reasoning there. I have lost a loved one to the virus and appreciate those who do wear them. Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from mermaids
You have created a two line poem that is smooth with the rhyming of words and has a strong steady beat. Your theme is relevant to today, we all need to wear a mask.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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You have created a two line poem that is smooth with the rhyming of words and has a strong steady beat. Your theme is relevant to today, we all need to wear a mask.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I avoid the unmasked when shopping and do not understand the reasoning there. I have lost a loved one to the virus and appreciate those who do wear them. Thank you for your review and kind words.
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My condolences to losing a loved one to the virus. It is heart breaking. Prayers sent. Elaine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like the theme - the need of wearing a mask, today everywhere across he world, is expressed so well with rhyme in 20 words; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I like the theme - the need of wearing a mask, today everywhere across he world, is expressed so well with rhyme in 20 words; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I avoid the unmasked when shopping and do not understand the reasoning there. I have lost a loved one to the virus and appreciate those who do wear them. Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from equestrik
You expressed this well in twenty words, very timely write. It just makes sense and I do not understand not wearing a mask. Please, wear mask indeed!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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You expressed this well in twenty words, very timely write. It just makes sense and I do not understand not wearing a mask. Please, wear mask indeed!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I avoid the unmasked when shopping and do not understand the reasoning there. I have lost a loved one to the virus and appreciate those who do wear them. Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Poetic Friend
I cannot fathom the resistance to wear a mask, which protects you and others. I have scratched my head countless time, trying to figure it out.
The resistance may have something to do with disbelief regarding the severity of the virus or just plain rebellious.
I understand that the mask may be uncomfortable when worn for a long periods of time, but I rather wear a mask than be hospitalized for a long period of time.
Good luck in the contest. Your poem was well-written with a profound and critical message. It's catchy. Perhaps you should consider sending it to the media or somewhere else to reach an audience beyond FanStory.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I cannot fathom the resistance to wear a mask, which protects you and others. I have scratched my head countless time, trying to figure it out.
The resistance may have something to do with disbelief regarding the severity of the virus or just plain rebellious.
I understand that the mask may be uncomfortable when worn for a long periods of time, but I rather wear a mask than be hospitalized for a long period of time.
Good luck in the contest. Your poem was well-written with a profound and critical message. It's catchy. Perhaps you should consider sending it to the media or somewhere else to reach an audience beyond FanStory.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I avoid the unmasked when shopping and do not understand the reasoning there. I have lost a loved one to the virus and appreciate those who do wear them. Thank you for your review and kind words.
