Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 95 "Silence Broken "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
2 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
Unfortunately we are still in the throngs of not always be allowed our freedom of speech even today. In some cases, even more so. In other cases, trying to keep ahold and not losing what we have spoken for. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
  |
Unfortunately we are still in the throngs of not always be allowed our freedom of speech even today. In some cases, even more so. In other cases, trying to keep ahold and not losing what we have spoken for. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
-
Blessings and Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Your 3-5-3 poem can apply for so many situations, that I don't dare to give a simple interpretation. I agree that 3-5-3 syllables do not give room for much statement, but especially the last "Folks Woken?" indicates me your doubt of the efficiency or solution of the initially hopeful words:Words spoken and silence now broken.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
|
Your 3-5-3 poem can apply for so many situations, that I don't dare to give a simple interpretation. I agree that 3-5-3 syllables do not give room for much statement, but especially the last "Folks Woken?" indicates me your doubt of the efficiency or solution of the initially hopeful words:Words spoken and silence now broken.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
-
Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering. Yes, our future is yet to determined. Blessings to you.
-
Welcome to the review!