Cutting
Coping with pain.3 total reviews
Comment from mauial
Nice job with the prompt.I like the way you expressed the thought of a personʻs feelings bleeding onto the page in hopes it would free them of pain. Many find writing is a great release. I do.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Nice job with the prompt.I like the way you expressed the thought of a personʻs feelings bleeding onto the page in hopes it would free them of pain. Many find writing is a great release. I do.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Me too. Thank you for your review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Surely writing down our feelings tend to possess some magical soothing power to calm down our nerves and get us relaxed. It seems to also serve as a vent pipe of emotions. Good job. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Surely writing down our feelings tend to possess some magical soothing power to calm down our nerves and get us relaxed. It seems to also serve as a vent pipe of emotions. Good job. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Prakriti2
It is a beautiful piece. I think the punctuation can be better, with a full stop at the end. I love how you are telling that words can give you solace from pain. Maybe play with word choices.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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It is a beautiful piece. I think the punctuation can be better, with a full stop at the end. I love how you are telling that words can give you solace from pain. Maybe play with word choices.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your insightful review.
