Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Homecoming
by Lisa Wharton

Hello, Lisa,

Thank you for adding a chapter to our renga book. Good job, it needs a little work.

The magic of renga is connecting stanzas. In previous chapter you were home already.

finally at home
I can smell the fragrant stew.
and see our Molly

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

Thank you very much for the help.

The picture by the way was in the kitchen but not as good as a fireplace. I have found a different picture now. Dog and heath.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

When the homecoming is the matter so is the state of mind goes afar and gets fragrance of stew at home; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thank you so much