Awaiting Moonrise
Evening approaching awaiting moonrise.3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the
Stacked 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. The metaphor and imagery is very good. I like the nature topic. I vote for you.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the
Stacked 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. The metaphor and imagery is very good. I like the nature topic. I vote for you.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your read and encouraging comments.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem perfectly meets the stack of 5-7-5 stanzas. The picture of the receding evening sun and the appearance of the skies above through the cluster of trees precisely represents the theme of the poem. Beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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The poem perfectly meets the stack of 5-7-5 stanzas. The picture of the receding evening sun and the appearance of the skies above through the cluster of trees precisely represents the theme of the poem. Beautiful poem.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your read and kind comments.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Very nice ongoing poem. All the 5-7-5 stanzas flow into each other without punctuation, following the haiku tradition. This non-pausing writing also enhances the gradually change from sun to moon and stars and the delights of evening sounds.
I enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Very nice ongoing poem. All the 5-7-5 stanzas flow into each other without punctuation, following the haiku tradition. This non-pausing writing also enhances the gradually change from sun to moon and stars and the delights of evening sounds.
I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for the read and encouraging comments.
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Welcome!
