Hypocritical Influence
Save the baby, dump the rest29 total reviews
Comment from AnnieDawn
I was very comfortable with the message you have in your poem. I wish the flow was a little more even as it would make it easier to read and understand. The message was clear, but I had to reread it to put it together. We need more writing like yours these days. You have a gift for spiritual messages. I hope to run into more of your work.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I was very comfortable with the message you have in your poem. I wish the flow was a little more even as it would make it easier to read and understand. The message was clear, but I had to reread it to put it together. We need more writing like yours these days. You have a gift for spiritual messages. I hope to run into more of your work.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you, much appreciated.
Comment from Patty Palmer
So true, the words of your poem. One should believe or disbelieve the presence of the Lord by weighing it all out for themselves. The decision is not for others to make for you. It is your decision and your decision only. Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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So true, the words of your poem. One should believe or disbelieve the presence of the Lord by weighing it all out for themselves. The decision is not for others to make for you. It is your decision and your decision only. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thanks Patty. Yes, each will answer for themselves. I pray they make the right decision. God bless, Dennis
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think we see God through the eyes of our souls.Sometimes we commit a sin and we think we are not worthy so we stay away from God, until one day we hear his call and we return back to him. Are we hypocritical?
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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I think we see God through the eyes of our souls.Sometimes we commit a sin and we think we are not worthy so we stay away from God, until one day we hear his call and we return back to him. Are we hypocritical?
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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We should make sure first of all that we are born-again as Jesus said we must be, in order to see and enter the Kingdom.
That happens by believing what Christ said about salvation: ?Most assuredly, I say to you, he who hears My word and believes in Him who sent Me has everlasting life, and shall not come into judgment, but has passed from death into life." John 5:24
Even after we become true believers we may act hypocritically because of fear or lack of knowlege. My poem was really addressed to unbelievers who are supposedly so turned off by the failures of us who profess Christ, they can't possibly believe.
God bless, Dennis
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Denzi, I am so glad you have posted here, other wise I would never had the opportunity to review any of your work.
I was also delighted to find a man with such a deep seated faith as you have demonstrated in this poem.
Your question to the unsure investigator was nicely phrased. and please keep writing.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Dear Denzi, I am so glad you have posted here, other wise I would never had the opportunity to review any of your work.
I was also delighted to find a man with such a deep seated faith as you have demonstrated in this poem.
Your question to the unsure investigator was nicely phrased. and please keep writing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
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Well now we're both happy we met. Thank you so much for your encouraging words. God bless you, Dennis
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right--never let others decide for you--esp in your beliefs of God/Jesus. Your poem reads well with good rhymes, good flow, and a great message. You make several valid points about what some believe and/or should believe or act upon.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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You are right--never let others decide for you--esp in your beliefs of God/Jesus. Your poem reads well with good rhymes, good flow, and a great message. You make several valid points about what some believe and/or should believe or act upon.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Jan, your kind words are much appreciated, Dennis
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are powerful, descriptive and creative. The reader
found this poem has a clear message. Thank you for the author's notes.
I like the quote chosen. The format of the poem is attractive and compliments to the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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The author's words are powerful, descriptive and creative. The reader
found this poem has a clear message. Thank you for the author's notes.
I like the quote chosen. The format of the poem is attractive and compliments to the words of this poem.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragment. Very much appreciated, Dennis
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
"For God did not send His Son into the world to condemn the world, but that the world through Him might be saved." That is the true measure of a loving Father, the greatest of sacrifices to save His children.
There are so many things that Jesus said and true miracles that he performed, and yet we have the non-believers.
Your articulate thoughts do send a clear message.
Ralf
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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"For God did not send His Son into the world to condemn the world, but that the world through Him might be saved." That is the true measure of a loving Father, the greatest of sacrifices to save His children.
There are so many things that Jesus said and true miracles that he performed, and yet we have the non-believers.
Your articulate thoughts do send a clear message.
Ralf
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from mermaids
This is an excellent faith based poem that reminds the reader not to listen to others. Study the Word and follow God, think for yourself. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words and the two line verses are perfect.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent faith based poem that reminds the reader not to listen to others. Study the Word and follow God, think for yourself. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words and the two line verses are perfect.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hypocritical Influence
by Deniz22
Hello, Deni,
A very religious poem about your beliefs. I don't like the fear based religion but we all have the right to chose what we believe.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Hypocritical Influence
by Deniz22
Hello, Deni,
A very religious poem about your beliefs. I don't like the fear based religion but we all have the right to chose what we believe.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Choose Jesus and all fear is gone. Another meaning of ?fear? in the Bible is respect.
Comment from royowen
Whatever happens keep the faith, control the earthly lusts and propensities, for God has given us a heart of flesh. It is easier to know what ones to have, our destination is Heaven, these countries our flesh inhabit will pass away. Beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Whatever happens keep the faith, control the earthly lusts and propensities, for God has given us a heart of flesh. It is easier to know what ones to have, our destination is Heaven, these countries our flesh inhabit will pass away. Beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Thanks brother!
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